A Toddler's Shot At It..

Ok this is my first try ever >>

 

I saw her walk in a black lingerie, anticipating the outcome of the intense encounter. She could feel the hardness as she came over to kiss me. I scooped her in my arms, we fell to the bed, loosing ourselves in the timeless dimension of lust as we became one.

 

I know that is not even erotica! :-(

Floydian Floydian
26-30, M
21 Responses Mar 6, 2009

:D

Awww you nut, I did not expect you in the least to take it seriously!

Well what can I say? I DO love it and I DO think its great!<br />
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" I scooped her in my arms, we fell to the bed, loosing ourselves in the timeless dimension of lust as we became one."<br />
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That was my favorite part.

Haha. Lamo!<br />
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Dude you just cracked me up.

It was superb and mindboggling. I have not seen that written as of yet. lol

Stereotype comment. Cant you come up with something new?

I love it! Its great!

Hehe for what?

Haha nice thing, me too, but someone has to write. Want some cool links ;)

I hate reading. Ill just wait for the movie to come out...

Wooh thanks! :-)

I think the line "walk in black lingerie" is a particularly good one. Looking forward to the extended dance mix!<br />
:)

Aha, now that is some value out of writing! ;)

Aww thank you, and now that I have caught you, let me pm you. hehe!

Floyd- you got skills baby :)...very nice!

Thank you, I believe you should be kindinva instead of nudeinva! :-)

It was erotic, it had lust, desire, passion, what more can you ask for? Great story!

Young rampant ramper, i sort of like that! :-)

Why not. :)

Thank you, you are kind, I have decided to write a long one. And that will be EROTIC! :-)

Oh, young rogue, that is very erotic. *fans self*<br />
Bravo.