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The Barrens

She came to me out of a fog one day
Battered , lost and full of hunger
 And I gave her a safe harbour
I held at bay the winter's storms
 Secure against my gentle shore
With all I had I filled her hold
Every goodness this land could unfold
 She sailed away over the horizon
and left a barren land behind
She'll only pass this way once
 as the lost so often will
She left behind this rocky coast
so rocky then , so rocky still

Alterede Alterede 51-55, M 1 Response Dec 9, 2009

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this was quite good. i could feel "you". it wasn't like a canned recital of a person. it held meaning that anyone could find themselves in. thanks for sharing....