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I Want To Write Something That Doesn't Make Sense

What Child Is This?

By: RavenDelcor
Written on May 20th, 2012
Age: 56-60 , Male
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  • fuglygirlonthebench

    Amazing...

    May 21, 2012
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  • JamieLee1

    Sounds like a story of my birth and life.....................................................What child? What child? A Child in life, that no one ever knew! Her life was forbidden, by everyone around her! So in her incarceration she died as a he................................How sad!



    Jamie Lee

    May 20, 2012
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    • RavenDelcor

      Thanks Jamie, it seems you got a lot more out of this than was put in. I do see where you get it and am amazed with your response. Like silence, hidden amid the din, so is the death of people unknown. Sad indeed. Thanks.

      May 20, 2012
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  • Vignette

    I love this! Solidifying the intangible into solid form. And the child! The child! Enjoyed the imagery you convey with your words!!

    May 20, 2012
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    • RavenDelcor

      Thanks, I enjoy free writes, this one only started with the chant. Then I remembered what someone once said to me about music: Music is painted on a tapestry of silence.

      May 20, 2012
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    • Vignette

      "Music is painted on a tapestry of silence."
      What a beautiful way to describe music!!

      May 20, 2012
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