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Encounter - (very Explicit)

By: Coyotegray
Written on March 31st, 2009
Age: 61-65 , Male
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22 responses
  • vitvale

    Loverly encounter....ummm fantastic

    Feb 6, 2012
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  • Coyotegray

    Thanks GBS. My old English teacher would be stunned. LOL

    Dec 6, 2010
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  • goodbutsassy

    You write very well, you create the tension necessary for the reader and then of course the resolution, nice work

    Dec 5, 2010
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  • aftermath

    I already visited and liked what I read.



    **jumping, running, skipping to keep up, gulping air and saying*



    thought I missed something. ;~)

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • Coyotegray

    Check in this Group AM - there's more of mine and at least one piece of poetry.

    BTW - glad you liked it ;-)

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • aftermath

    Oh! My lucky day, to stumble in here!



    Did I miss the post about erotic poetry?

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • Coyotegray

    Very intriguing ideas! No offense taken

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • nishasen73

    Great ... Consistent with the style that the other one demanded. The details are really fantastic, only I wish you spent a little more on describing the moments before she was undressed. Just would have loved to savor the moments when your demanding palms lingered over her uncovered privates - the clothing providing only inadequate resistance.



    Just a thought, I don't mean as if I like to put forward corrections - sorry if I did so.

    Jul 31, 2009
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  • TopazSkye

    I second what TRW wrote

    Jun 7, 2009
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  • TheRealWoman

    Please continue to write Coyotegray...as a fellow erotic writer I enjoyed this, such fine detail.

    Apr 13, 2009
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  • justcouldcry

    oh god...reading this made me so wet...loved the details...and yes..write again!

    Apr 13, 2009
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  • Coyotegray

    Thanks Sahira, Myo - I'll see if I can get the poetry part of my head to connect to the erotic part - then maybe something will "pop up". ;-)

    Apr 1, 2009
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  • Myonis108

    They won't shut you down. The Erotic Lounge is the appropriate place for this. Let me know when you create your first erotic poem!

    Apr 1, 2009
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  • Coyotegray

    Haven't tried erotic poetry Myo - Maybe I'll give it a shot.



    Anyone know how long I can keep this up before the EP authorities shut me down?

    Apr 1, 2009
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  • Myonis108

    Hot. Very, very hot. The details are exquisite. You're good at this and you know I love your poetry. Have you written erotic poetry?

    Apr 1, 2009
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  • Coyotegray

    Thanks Sahira. Any idea how I can make money with it? I'm sure as hell not going to get rich writing poetry.

    Apr 1, 2009
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  • Coyotegray

    Sorry Krypton - don't wish to disturb your work. LOL



    Just an experiment - to see if I can write "this sort of thing".

    Apr 1, 2009
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  • Krypton

    You writing skills seem to have no boundary of genre. I should not read this kind of stuff at work.

    Apr 1, 2009
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  • Coyotegray

    "Really happen"? well, whose to say what happens - perhaps I just have a really vivid fantasy life.

    Apr 1, 2009
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  • FireryPhoenix

    Hmmmm....



    Too much fine detail. perhaps this did happen? :)



    That bathroom has never had so much fun!

    Mar 31, 2009
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  • Coyotegray

    Glad you enjoyed it. We aim to please.

    Mar 31, 2009
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  • Fallflower

    This encounter is extremely, extremely hot and sensual. It was very easy for me to imagine myself as that mischievously eyed woman. Thank you for sharing it with us.

    Mar 31, 2009
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