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I Want You To Write A 15 Word Story

Grief

By: Hongruilin
Written on February 4th, 2013
Devastatingly alone in the dark of a sleepless night, lost in her memories she cried.
By: Hongruilin
Age: 31-35 , Female
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17 responses
  • monkeypie69
    monkeypie69

    Hi, I cant communicate with you if I am not added!!

    Feb 5
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  • leoex
    leoex

    Your 15 word story sounds like japanese haika, I am just wondering, specialy or not.

    Feb 4
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    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Thank you for your kind comment. Unfortunately it was not especially created to be so.

      Feb 4
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    • leoex
      leoex

      You are wellcome. Let me be praud of You, You answered correctly in 15 words! :-))

      Feb 4
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    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Again, my thanks for noticing. I always attempt to respond within the word number limitations.

      Feb 4
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    • leoex
      leoex

      Great, You made rules and You`re following them. Keep on and you`ll achieve Your aimes :-)

      Feb 5
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  • livelaughlovedream3
    livelaughlovedream3

    I'm so sorry, H. Sending thoughts and hugs your way.

    Feb 4
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    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Thanks sweetie, I'm okay now. Was just a sleepless blip.

      Feb 4
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    • livelaughlovedream3
      livelaughlovedream3

      Just realized this was 15 not 10-word. I had a sleepless night Saturday. I understand.

      Feb 4
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    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Haha, no worries. Yesterday on "our story" I was writing 10-words before I caught myself.

      Feb 4
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    • livelaughlovedream3
      livelaughlovedream3

      Lol! ;) Easy to get into that mode. Challenging, too, which is part of the fun.

      Feb 4
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  • ambroseguy80
    ambroseguy80

    She seriously wondered if she would ever make it through to the light of day!

    Feb 4
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    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Tears spilling down her face, body consumed with sobs she watched the hours go by,

      Feb 4
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    • ambroseguy80
      ambroseguy80

      One, two, three... she tossed that way and this... four, five six... long ago bliss.

      Feb 4
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    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Realizing the futility of continuing to pretend rest was possible she rose. (Nice rhyming BTW!)

      Feb 4
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    • ambroseguy80
      ambroseguy80

      Her eyes were swollen and heavy; her smile, long departed. Her legs tired, they smarted. :-p

      Feb 4
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    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      (I'm not going to be to write about grief anymore with you making me giggle! :-P)

      Feb 4
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