No More Tears

If I could have
only one wish
I would
with all that I am
wish for you
to never shed
a tear
it were accompanied
by your beautiful

If I could change
all the wrong
that has been
put upon your
delicate shoulders
I would spend
all of my life
making certain
the only things
you had to carry
was a lifetime
of happiness
and a heartful
of love.
AllFoundandNoLost AllFoundandNoLost
41-45, M
8 Responses Nov 5, 2010

only if we could, we would, change the world.............very beautiful poem...

Thank you. We are tying the knot on Valentine's this coming. I didn't know I could be this happy.

This is just so heartfelt, sentimental and beautiful. The woman you love is very lucky indeed.

I like the imagery created by the natural flow of the write. I would think, however, to change the final verb "was" to agree with the nouns... <br />
<br />
ie: "making certain<br />
the only things<br />
you had to carry<br />
was a lifetime<br />
of happiness<br />
and a heartful <br />
of love."<br />
<br />
... change "was" to "were." <br />
<br />
Other than that I find it quite lovely a poem:) Enjoyed:)

i thought we covered that? ;-)

well, it ain't no goodbye, i am just now getting her! :-)

thanks sunshine...i hope she thinks so

Thank you so much for sharing in it with me, mystikRage. Everything is made so much more beautiful by sharing it.