Er...... Okay.

My wings have crumpled to my feet

I lay in wait, but not defeat

Tears come, yet no one hears me weep

For this heart can lie, but it never sleeps.

StarliteRose StarliteRose
26-30, F
8 Responses Feb 10, 2010

Thank you!!! It's actually one of my favorites I've written...... and I wrote it in like 15 seconds.

That's so simple and so sweet. It's beautiful. I love it.

Heehee! Thank you for reading my stories--you rock! ;-D

things that make you go ... hhhmmm

LOL Wilmaa: <br />
Your poem makes me think of flowers<br />
And commercials for foot powder!<br />
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*hugs Kitti tight and admires her work with that roll of duct tape* Thank you mamacita! This is a fun group, I'm gonna join!

awww * kitti takes stars wings ...duct tapes them to her back * duct tape fixes everything baby ....by the way this was sooo beautiful ...=-D

Awww, thanks love, I've been writing poems since I was a tot---thankfully I don't reek at it, lol ;-P

Heehee, thanks babe! =D