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I Want You to Write a Ten Word Story

Weakness

By: justmeonline

Written on July 28th, 2012

Such beauty I cannot take without lying all night awake.

By: justmeonline

Age: 36-40 , Male

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18 responses

Pantoufles

This is beautiful! And I love the rhyme as well - which isn't easy in a 10 word story!

Aug 9, 2012
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- justmeonline
  Thank you -- I'm just about to post another...
  
  Aug 9, 2012
  1 like
SymphonyAngel

I really like this. It's very romantic :)

Aug 9, 2012
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- justmeonline
  Yes, thank you SymphonyAngel :)
  
  Aug 9, 2012
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Sungirl3

Your beauty captivates me

Gives me insomnia

Thinking of you

Aug 8, 2012
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- justmeonline
  Exactly right, my friend!
  
  Aug 8, 2012
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- Sungirl3
  ;)
  
  Aug 8, 2012
  1 like
CMA1234

Breathtaking.... and Lovely! ... and most Beautiful !!

Aug 5, 2012
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touchOFspring

Lovely!

Aug 5, 2012
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goingtobeme

This is my favorite

Aug 2, 2012
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SupermanDC

Insightful short story of love here.

Jul 29, 2012
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papri

beautiful!!

Jul 29, 2012
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LG76

aw...very lovely :) xoxo

Jul 28, 2012
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ShakespeareSonnet116

Oh! How very sweet. :))

Jul 28, 2012
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sierra33

Sometimes beautiful words don't need any names attached...They just stand on their own and shine.... :)

Jul 28, 2012
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- justmeonline
  :)
  
  Jul 28, 2012
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sierra33

awww....just awwww...

Jul 28, 2012
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- justmeonline
  Thanks and of course I won't be mentioning names, either, though my feelings are nothing but complimentary :)
  
  Jul 28, 2012
  1 like