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I Want You to Write a Ten Word Story

Easily Hurt

By: Hongruilin
Written on November 30th, 2012
Hidden behind deceptively thin walls was a fragile little girl.
By: Hongruilin
Age: 31-35 , Female
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19 responses
  • leantannedguy
    leantannedguy

    She receives an anonomous gift of feather light, inpenetrable armor

    Dec 3, 2012
    1 like
    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Doning the armour she felt able to face the world.

      Dec 3, 2012
      1 like
    • leantannedguy
      leantannedguy

      Her first battle is hard but she emerges entirely unscathed

      Dec 4, 2012
      1 like
  • OverWritten
    OverWritten

    But her thinly veiled fragility was also her strongest defense.

    Nov 30, 2012
    1 like
    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Confused how it was a defense she asked for clarification.

      Nov 30, 2012
      1 like
    • OverWritten
      OverWritten

      A stone is snatched unthinkingly; flowers are picked with care

      Nov 30, 2012
      1 like
    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Enchanted with the response she looked up and softly smiled.

      Nov 30, 2012
      1 like
  • drksideofthemoon
    drksideofthemoon

    She was as delicate as grandma's bone china from Dresden.

    Nov 30, 2012
    1 like
    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Beautiful china requires a delicate touch or it will shatter.

      Nov 30, 2012
      1 like
    • sansseraph
      sansseraph

      Transparent too, held to the light, your hand is visible.

      Nov 30, 2012
      1 like
  • alphadave
    alphadave

    A fragile little girl, one dreamed of her own starem.

    Nov 30, 2012
    1 like
    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      I was trying to think of an appropriate ten word answer, but couldn't due to how much I was laughing about the starem.

      Nov 30, 2012
      1 like
    • alphadave
      alphadave

      I guess frailty and sexual prowess are not mutually exclusive

      Nov 30, 2012
      1 like
  • SupermanDC
    SupermanDC

    Story with great meaning and thoughts.

    Nov 30, 2012
    1 like
  • livelaughlovedream3
    livelaughlovedream3

    Can't think of a 10-word response to this, but your 10-word story is sadly beautiful.

    Nov 30, 2012
    2 likes
    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Thank you my dear friend.

      Nov 30, 2012
      1 like
  • FordPrefect42
    FordPrefect42

    Hugs the fragile girl until she realizes her great worth

    Nov 30, 2012
    3 likes
    • Hongruilin
      Hongruilin

      Smiling softly she thanked the stranger for his caring embrace.

      Nov 30, 2012
      1 like