Always Strive

to do you best, give your all, never give up 

SantanaRex SantanaRex
46-50, M
9 Responses Feb 8, 2009

true friends give honest advice, others may just be nice

Well written, I concede, even without the title to guide!

indeed, its so easy to say, so hard to live

A lesson all of us should heed :)

The title is not the story though, they go together<br />
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Alot of titles would work, this one just fr<x>ames it<br />
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If I used "Success" would it have read the same?

The sentiment is very good and worthy of ongoing pursuit.<br />
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However, the story was said in twelve, not ten words.<br />
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For without the title, the story would be totally obscure.<br />
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Keep on writing and sharing wonderful stories for us all!

No one is ever a failure until they stop trying

gee thanks

It may take many attempts for success, don't give up!