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I Want You to Write a Ten Word Story

Sleepless Nights

By: CosmicLucidity
Written on March 1st, 2009

 

"You hurt me.

I forgave. Forgot. 

You did it again."

 

"I love you like fat kids love cake. Too much."

 

By: CosmicLucidity
Age: 22-25 , Female
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    This is almost a haiku poem, Jucelala, expressing more than just the words.



    It takes a writer with talent, insight -and, unfortunately, the kind of intensely-felt experience you had to endure- to say so much with just those 20 little words.

    Jan 13, 2010
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