I Wrote This Part 9

I like this one but only for the line I underlined!

 


Keep you my angel



I want to keep you, but you got me going scared

I’ll never leave you, please don’t let go of my hand

VS

The universal limit,

could never reach your level

The afternoon rush,

could never run you by

 

the way your eyes are glaze

Your painting my horizon

stretched out, harmless , blue

every essence of being you



Mother nature

could never be your shadow

My Infatuation, too strong to tear

all the hearts out, hoping for tomorrow

ready to stand by and fight their tears

it’s these beautiful moments, incomparable dreams

face reality, but for once it’s easy




CHORUS       

Like the sweetest taste of honey

Like the sweetest smell of flowers

like the loveliest dove, spreading her life

flying higher

like the sunrise in the morning

like the soft touch in my hand

like the speed of light, just one smile

never leave this sight again

It’s heaven in a body, I think I understand

And I’ll do the best I can



To keep you my angel,

Vs

Standing on the edges

I’m ready to explain

I’ve had the best

no measurement

can break what I have gained

your voice is lightning 

pure in control

no matter what happens, I just don’t want to go

so whenever you’re ready, say it to me

I don’t have anywhere else to be

but here, looking at you

amazed, you know what you do



CHORUS

Like the sweetest taste of honey

Like the sweetest smell of flowers

like the loveliest dove, spreading her life

flying higher

like the sunrise in the morning

like the soft touch in my hand

like the speed of light, just one smile

never leave this sight again

It’s heaven in a body, I think I understand

And I’ll do the best I can

To keep you my angel,

 

I want to keep you, but you got me going scared

I’ll never leave you, please don’t let go of my hand



I just like that one line! Really. It made me want to give myself flowers!






LuckymeIshouldsee LuckymeIshouldsee
18-21
1 Response Feb 22, 2010

I'll give you flowers! Often the artist loses the freshness of the piece. It is good. I like it