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I Went to Blackpool

Blackpool Boating. The Last Oarsman

By: Bikewreck
Written on August 22nd, 2011
By: Bikewreck
Age: 41-45 , Male
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  • LilyDaleGirl

    Beautiful. And a lovely image of home for a girl who misses her front yard of sand on the Chesapeake and deep-sea fishing when it's so cold your "wet from salt spray" hair develops the thinnest sheathing of ice- slashing like rapiers every time you try to swing a catch over the side from amidships. Not an easy task for a girl reeling in a tuna half her weight (I'm a bit of a contradiction: I'll bait a hook or gladly voluteer for barrelman if ever given the chance- all with a French Manicure and flat-ironed hair. Hey- I'm a girl. I like being a girl. A lot. But I'm also a woman of the ocean, a waterbaby, a syren. Your beautifully crafted story suggests to me that you, as well, know what it's like to stand with your toes in the surf on say, a late August twilight, watching and deliberating it's colours carefully, while feeling the wind rush in and at you and charging you like a battery. That is an experience I am truly blessed to have been born able have.

    Sep 4, 2011
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    • Bikewreck

      Ha! I hear the waves in those words. Thank you for your comments :-)

      Sep 5, 2011
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