I Probably Will Later, But Tha...

Be sure and get to it when first you can, for it is the first impressions shared with the reader for their work that are most impressive upon their art. That is, what you first felt is something you should try and remember when finally getting around to leaving comments to others' writing shared, since otherwise your comment could seem dredged from a place it should't have come, as you've allowed other things by then to alter your original thoughts after reading, you know? Just thought I would add that here, as after reading your brief story, made sense to comment, of course;)