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Oh Come On, I'll Show You Mine If You'll Show Me Yours.............

Something bit my toe last night

I don't know what it was.

A sudden pain, a drop of blood,

And I looked down, because

I wondered if my cat had used

His claw to get attention,

In hope that I had filled his bowl

But no such intervention.

It must have been a bug that crept

Up while I was writing,

Then flew away to find some other

Victim for a fly-by biting.

 

chovhani chovhani 46-50, F 3 Responses Sep 19, 2007

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Hahaha you're useless in this group...That wasn't bad,get out!^^<br />
It's much much better than this crappy,cheesy,tearful stuff that people post on ep thinking they actually can write anything good.<br />
Don't mind emerald,dunno what she sees as good poetry and Un4given is right:D.<br />
You remind me of one of my favorite poets (Wisława Szymborska,I'm not surprised if you don't know her...but she did win a Nobel prize,ha!;D).<br />
Keep it up:)

That is quite a talent you have, no kidding

Ya know, that was just so CHEEZY, it was GREAT!! lol. :)