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I Can Still Feel You

I can still feel you
Your heart beats inside my soul
Your love holds me tight
SWATgirl SWATgirl 26-30, F 5 Responses Jul 1, 2007

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Thank you, thats a nice compliment. Thats what I love about haikus. The challenge to fit such broad ideas and feelings in so few words.

I might try writing one :)



I usually, wrongly, assume I have to write lines and lines of poetry to get the meaning across, you do it with those three lines so well :)

How can so few words mean so much? That's the fascinating wonder with haikus...

Thanks! I appreciate the support!

I feel your vibe !! And understand!!

Cheers!