I Never Usually Do This But I Am By Random

once found

now bored

feel like losing myself again

to drive into forgetfulness

back to thoughts, feelings, where i did'nt really care

I am now borded, i feel like coming back to a memory

i would like to loose myself again

MsIndependant MsIndependant
18-21, F
7 Responses Jan 11, 2008

I don't think it's lame - just a suggestion: try thinking about how to express yourself in images rather than abstract words (eg 'forgetfulness' try something like 'the smudge in my brain when I try to recall ..' ) poetry is very much a learned art, & you are young. Don't give up.

"getting lost in something feels good always
but i'm someone who's always lost in something
so i can't really say i miss it when i'm not".
really nice poem.

sparing and chilling use of words. a border is a line drwawn through a map. ur bigger than that!

cool poem, i can relate, i have an inate abalty to lose my self in my music,, someday i hope to be able to lose myself with somebody

I know what your saying, being lost is a lot funner when your found though looking back i done the most exciting things when i was lost but didnt really appreciate them, now i have responsibilities i miss it!

...You spelled "lose" wrong...

kinda trippy i guess, keep practicing, i like ur logo