Post

I Never Usually Do This But I Am By Random

once found

now bored

feel like losing myself again

to drive into forgetfulness

back to thoughts, feelings, where i did'nt really care

I am now borded, i feel like coming back to a memory

i would like to loose myself again

MsIndependant MsIndependant 19-21, F 8 Responses Jan 11, 2008

Your Response

Cancel

I don't think it's lame - just a suggestion: try thinking about how to express yourself in images rather than abstract words (eg 'forgetfulness' try something like 'the smudge in my brain when I try to recall ..' ) poetry is very much a learned art, & you are young. Don't give up.

it didnt ryhyme....lame poem no offense

you know poems do not need to rhyme also no real reason to put down the writer.

"getting lost in something feels good always
but i'm someone who's always lost in something
so i can't really say i miss it when i'm not".
really nice poem.

sparing and chilling use of words. a border is a line drwawn through a map. ur bigger than that!

cool poem, i can relate, i have an inate abalty to lose my self in my music,, someday i hope to be able to lose myself with somebody

I know what your saying, being lost is a lot funner when your found though looking back i done the most exciting things when i was lost but didnt really appreciate them, now i have responsibilities i miss it!

...You spelled "lose" wrong...

kinda trippy i guess, keep practicing, i like ur logo