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Unsatisfied Longing

I have this wanting in my heart and confusion in my mind.
The words I’ve left unspoken haunt me all the time.

There are nights I wake crying when I wish that you were near.
To hold me in your arms and kiss away this tear.

Right now my heart is deep and black-blacker than coal.
So I go on day after day with emptiness in my soul.

There is something that keeps me holding on although what I’ll never know.
Someday I won’t be afraid anymore and I’ll admit that I need you so.

 

fungirlmmm fungirlmmm 41-45, F 17 Responses Aug 3, 2008

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You portray that broken emptiness so well. As one who is familiar with it. Very well done.

Thanks

Very nice poem fungirl!!

Thanks Dew. I had forgotten about this post but reading it brings back a flood of memories on what I was thinking when I wrote it. This is a great memory for me so thanks. I am glad you found it in my posts.

I can't help but be caught up in the flow of your poem…DD

I just tried to look for that piece you mentioned writing, about abuse...but I didn't find it! You have so many stories...

good art to me creates a vivid picture in my mind of the mind of the artist. this is good stuff!

YW... thanks for sharing

Thank you very much...

That's the one... I am going to write about suicide when I can get my nerve to do it...It is kind of like my molestation piece.. it had to be at the right time... It racked my nerves for days after I posted it. That piece brought me to tears Brut.. it was very well written. good job.

That's the one... I am going to write about suicide when I can get my nerve to do it...It is kind of like my molestation piece.. it had to be at the right time... It racked my nerves for days after I posted it. That piece brought me to tears Brut.. it was very well written. good job.

Thank you so much...Thank you...<br />
Are you talking about the small town suicide...? That was weird, the way that one just flowed. Sorry, there are so many poems...

ty ladies... I only hope that someday Brut I will write a story that will touch me as much as the poem you posted about your friend at work... I was so moved by that and I only hope to move people in that way some day.

Beautiful, FG.

wow...............

Wow Irish... thanks for your kind words. I love this place and I look forward to reading your stuff. I try to read stories of all people on my circle and those who comment on my stories. It takes me a while sometimes however. thanks again. i look forward to knowing you better.

wow its amazing to see others with same thoughts and feel. I like it, I really do need to spend more time on here and read more of peoples thoughts. Ive seen other stuff that you have talked about in other areas, some funny some good answers. I cant help but know you by your sexy avatars! That alone is worth taking time out of a busy day Thanks for making my day!