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Silent Anger

i stare at the sky.
i just want to fly.
why am i here?
while the end is near.
i hear a scream.
am i in a dream?
my dear old friend,
dead in the end,
leaving me alone behind,
while i am blind.
all of my kin
burned for their sin.
i fall and hopelessly lay
there appeared a ray.
i walked where it lead.
till i too fall dead.

-SR
me2you2me me2you2me 18-21, M 6 Responses Jan 9, 2013

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I love the rhythm that this poem brought forward. The meaning behind the words is quite beautiful.

good job babe

thanks

np

that it vary good you are talented

thanks

your welcome i have some poems but well i couldnt share them im not good enough to do that

well you never know until you post

i dont know i think i like thinking they suck lol its easyer for me to bealive

i thought same about mine but i posted.many me think i suck but some may like it and that is enough. you don't have to satisfy everyone.

i guess i can put my old one on but i dont know

give it try. don't worry about the result

ok ill try just give me a few

okay

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so true. your poetry is very deep and realistic also sad.

thank you

it s great , but no , u won't get burnt

:)

I like your poem.

thanks for liking it :)