I Write Poetry and Short Stories

Waking Moments

By: TheHiker

Written on August 11th, 2012

And in that waking moment; Dashed

The dream of taking you at last

The dream of you within my arms

To succumb to all my loving charms

To fall to all these words I say

To love and lust the dream's array

To be seduced and be so smitten

To purr for me just like a kitten

And in the waking moment; Dashed

Reality comes on so fast.

~The Snowdog~

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Age: 41-45 , Male

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21 responses

MaryP5

My lucky day. Another favorite pops up. :)

Jan 28
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- TheHiker
  All kinds of pop ups today.
  :-o
  
  Jan 28
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- MaryP5
  Oh my. It's suddenly warm in here.
  
  Jan 28
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- TheHiker
  Hahaha...., Happy Monday! = )
  
  Jan 28
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lifesanadventure

I feel your dream...... wish u all the best. Nice poem.

Jan 28
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- TheHiker
  thanx for the wishes and the compliment
  
  Jan 28
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touchOFspring

Hope your dream comes true

Aug 13, 2012
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- TheHiker
  Thank you, very much.Very, very much.
  
  Aug 13, 2012
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2011A

A good one, Hiker. But I have only one question:why can it not happen? My dream has come true. I did not even dream of a man to love me. Just of peace and freedom. And Forever man found me. And we have made commitments to each other. So if this impossible dream can materialize for me, then why not for you? You are kind and compassionate and tender....And do not joke with me now.....It is a matter of what you open yourself to...Anything is possible. I know that now. So should you. So I do not rate the spirit of your poem as exquisite. You have to believe. And it IS possible. I KNOW that, Hiker, my dear friend. Kisses....Think about it...

Aug 13, 2012
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- TheHiker
  Perhaps, I'm simply open to too many things at once ?
  
  Aug 13, 2012
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- 2011A
  Or not open enough to the possibilities of love...You have come a long, long way, my hiking friend. Perhaps there is one who would take your hand and walk with you. Just sayin'.....And, kisses...LOL!
  
  Aug 13, 2012
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- TheHiker
  You and those kisses....
  -hehehehe !
  
  Aug 13, 2012
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- 2011A
  And I remember when you said do not give them to me because you could not take them. But there is one who would willingly give them to you...I wish you would let destiny take her course...You cannot fight it. Oh, you can, but to what avail? You know how wonderful it would be for you, Hiker. Yes, I am affectionate. I have lived without for a very long time. But Forever man is one with me now. And I suffer no more like that. You can avoid answering my questions here and now. But you know I am right. Always am....Kisses. And putting my arm around you. Whispering in your ear, "Take a chance, Hiker. You will not be sorry this time, love." *smiling and leaving now*
  
  Aug 13, 2012
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- TheHiker
  http://www.experienceproject.com/stories/Write-Poetry-And-Short-Stories/2493904
  
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StoriesFromtheHeart

We always have our dreams....

Aug 11, 2012
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- TheHiker
  That we do. That we do.....
  
  Aug 11, 2012
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sierra33

Oh...I really liked that song too! :)

Aug 11, 2012
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- TheHiker
  Whoot whoot !
  
  Aug 11, 2012
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sierra33

Ya know what? Sometimes dreams come true!! Yup...sometimes they do, so it's good to keep having them... This sounds like it was a good one!! :)

Aug 11, 2012
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- TheHiker
  I do not dare for the impossible, only the highly improbable. So enjoy your comments, Sierra. Truly I do.
  
  Aug 11, 2012
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- sierra33
  aww thanks....I enjoy all you write too.... There is sooo much to you that peeks thru.. between the words sometimes..... :)
  
  Aug 11, 2012
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