In the Big Dip

Certain broken promisses remind,

questionable fears abide,

Perfunctory courtesy slides,

Dim stares sheath the eyes,

The wheels of existance grind,

Deadline dates expire,

Eccentricities of time

Devoid and multiplied,

Old grief, old pain is fire,

Hope left foundering in the mire,

No self, no love, no pride,

Against the course of life's invective,

Become I, introspective.


johnnyjohnnyjohnny johnnyjohnnyjohnny
26-30, M
1 Response Feb 10, 2009

Nice alliteration in this one. You sound like me.