Time Is No Friend Of Mine

Such power and might,
oh dwindling time,
for you show no lies,
in due time.

A corroding life,
you lead me to,
please cradle me,
i say to you,
mercy please
i beg of you,
save me now
i am residue.
Alphab3tSoup Alphab3tSoup
26-30, M
2 Responses Jul 9, 2010

Thank you!<br />
<br />
I have only just took up this new found passion.<br />
But i am planning to stick to it,<br />
thank you for the encouragement.<br />
<br />
I really enjoy the feedback :)

For such a young writer you have done very well. I am sure many pressures are around you. Hold tight to yourself and your goals. Keep writing....it is a great means of releasing some of your frustrations.<br />
<br />
Smiles to you.<br />
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