I Write Poetry

~mon âme~ (my Soul)

By: PrettyOldSoul

Written on March 18th, 2011

~Maestro~

Your Love is the symphony of my lonely hearts sorrow in repose, the unwitting precociousness of a child's innocence I see in the reflection of your eyes as the elucidation of my happiness dances deep within.

My heart flows with syncopation
as it beats to the dancing winds
of the ~Ruwach~ you hold.

A simplicity of rhythm,
that of familiar duplication
that does comfort my soul.

The Chief Musician inside of me sings to the melody of your Love.

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22 responses

juliegirlie

The Inside Ruwach I hold, give also Light Force for You, mys lil sister. XXOO

Mar 21, 2011
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Grieta

@ dreamingmylifeaway

Prettyoldsoul and me, we are good friends, and she knows I was only teasing her. Just for your information, I think this is awesome, and she is a great writer f poems. She does not give herself enough credit.

POS- you rock, my friend.

Mar 20, 2011
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iluvnerds12

XD iz k:)

Mar 20, 2011
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PrettyOldSoul

I',M SORRY HONEY i ALSO MEANT TO SAY THAT ARE YOU THE WISEST 13 YEAR OLD I HAVE EVER ME T

XXOO SILLY ME.

Mar 20, 2011
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PrettyOldSoul

Oh now wee one don't you start on me, you are the strong one,..no put me back in your pocket and away we go!

I have missed you little one. Hope Im doing my job right while tucked way in your pocket,. Just always remember,, Wat wud PrettyOldSoul think of this? Then do exactly what you were going to do any way... cuse pretyoldsoul thinks yu are he wisest 3 yer old girl she has ever had he pleasure to know.. Yu always make the right decision,..I am proud of you my little friend:

Now heres some tissue, go blow your nose and get out of the adult section, I;ll be right over,..

LOL,..)) You know I kid with you,..you are always welcome inside of my heart an on te pages I scribble it on too!.

Mar 20, 2011
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iluvnerds12

dis iz sooo.....beautiful :'( i need 2 take out sum tissues nowXD no but really...ur awesum!<3

Mar 20, 2011
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PrettyOldSoul

Ma Jolie Julie,.

Always in my heart you are,.. I don't believe you know of any language other than that of Love.,

I am honored to have you as my French Tutor, who better than to teach the language of love than she who speaks it.,...

d'admiration pour mon maître et ami le plus Beautiful Soul d'apprendre. ..

If we keep this up,. all who enter here will know the French language..lol

Mar 20, 2011
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juliegirlie

Song of Love in my soul.

Gold flakes as tears,

Coloured pearls in my heart.

Cloud of Love on my skin.

Earthly Paradise is not so far.

I've the KEY, I open the door, I see my Sun, the platinium Shell offer me more than a treasure, I've now a real friend for the WAY to constellations.

Mar 20, 2011
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PrettyOldSoul

Why Thank you kindly Der Sir,. I do have a pretty shiny soul don't I,..

When a mirror finds itself precariously situated before me I see only what my aging eyes will allow . A woman looking back at me with bewilderment on her face,.., why did it take this body so very long figure out who she has always been...on the inside. :)

Mar 20, 2011
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FordPrefect42

This is very beautiful, Pretty! A good reflection of your soul ;-)

Mar 20, 2011
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PrettyOldSoul

You are indeed my hero,.Dreamingmylifeaway,..I honestly appreciate your battle readiness on behalf of my pure words as you so read them .

A woman of Valor!

Grieta,..just look what have you started (*shakes head in utter dis belief *),

Is that any way for a friend of mine to act? Going around stirring the cauldron when you don't even have enough crows to fill the Pot,..... I'll swing by later and pick you up for a witches brew and we'll discuss my Lustful ways..),..:)

Now where did I put my Broom?

Love you, you know I do,, Always the misfit, Knoa

Mar 20, 2011
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DragonBlue

Oh, well. Teasing between friends is okay.

Mar 20, 2011
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mother1983

You are welcome.

Mar 19, 2011
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PrettyOldSoul

Chance, I admire you and appreciate your kindness always.

Dreaming....I think my friend was teasing me..:) I hope...and thank you.

Mar 19, 2011
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DragonBlue

Even if there was something here that shouldn't be seen by children, I can't see how a child would know what it means unless *SOMEONE* took the time to explain it. Franky, I didn't really see *anything* to object to. I guess I need it explained to me. Please mum, teach me? It did seem to me to be nothing more than a love song.

Mar 19, 2011
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certaintyofchance

You write with both clarity and beauty.

I find in these words (as I do in almost everything you write) Compassion and love.

The more I read you, the more I know you, the more i know you , the more I admire you

Mar 19, 2011
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PrettyOldSoul

SM :) much love.

Mar 19, 2011
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mother1983

lovely words

Power Pretty.

Mar 19, 2011
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PrettyOldSoul

Thank you. LyNz46. I appreciate the comment.

Mar 19, 2011
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PrettyOldSoul

Awww,. Thank you dear Jimmy,...Love it is.

Mar 19, 2011
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jimmyrudyjump

Majestic in its simplicity, glorious in its subdued beauty, these are words which are sharp as cupido's arrows, but soft as the mesmerizing, lingering reflection in her eyes...

This is... love.

Mar 19, 2011
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Grieta

Just this.... you know this is a place where people- some innocent little children!!!- gather to read?

How can you put stuff like this on here?

*shaking head in disgust*

But truth be told, this is good, friend,. Inspired and from the heart. Whoever he is, he is a lucky man.

Mar 19, 2011
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