My Inner Turmoil

i cannot pen it on paper

nor nail it with a tack

it slithers through my mind,

painting the walls black.


it muffles my ears

with soundless tones,

shaking my thoughts and

rattling my bones.

AcloudOnTheGround AcloudOnTheGround 26-30, M 4 Responses Apr 24, 2011

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Sometimes people get so lost in their own inner worlds that they can't hear God any more...

Thinking it is all about them and not something greater,

Usually by doing this and shutting out the world,

You would miss out on the chance to fulfil your life purpose.

lol. I like it!!!

tankooouuu! : )

aw thanks!

it's not great cause i wrote it last minute, but i agree simplicity is always good :)