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My Inner Turmoil

i cannot pen it on paper

nor nail it with a tack

it slithers through my mind,

painting the walls black.


it muffles my ears

with soundless tones,

shaking my thoughts and

rattling my bones.

PrinceAdonis PrinceAdonis 26-30, M 4 Responses Apr 24, 2011

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Sometimes people get so lost in their own inner worlds that they can't hear God any more...<br />
Thinking it is all about them and not something greater,<br />
Usually by doing this and shutting out the world,<br />
You would miss out on the chance to fulfil your life purpose.

lol. I like it!!!

tankooouuu! : )

aw thanks!<br />
it's not great cause i wrote it last minute, but i agree simplicity is always good :)