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I Write Poetry

My Inner Turmoil

By: AdonisDone
Written on April 24th, 2011

i cannot pen it on paper

nor nail it with a tack

it slithers through my mind,

painting the walls black.

 

it muffles my ears

with soundless tones,

shaking my thoughts and

rattling my bones.

By: AdonisDone
Age: 26-30 , Male
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  • ANONFU
    ANONFU

    Sometimes people get so lost in their own inner worlds that they can't hear God any more...

    Thinking it is all about them and not something greater,

    Usually by doing this and shutting out the world,

    You would miss out on the chance to fulfil your life purpose.

    Aug 17, 2012
    2 likes
  • TheoryUvaJen
    TheoryUvaJen

    lol. I like it!!!

    Apr 25, 2011
    1 like
  • AdonisDone
    AdonisDone

    tankooouuu! : )

    Apr 25, 2011
    1 like
  • AdonisDone
    AdonisDone

    aw thanks!

    it's not great cause i wrote it last minute, but i agree simplicity is always good :)

    Apr 25, 2011
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