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In Sleepless Hours

In nighttime's sleepless hours my reverie of you takes hold
I place a kiss so gentle as not to stir a sleeping baby on the face that fills my waking hours and haunts my dreams
You alone are my Northern lights, evoking a rainbow of cascading colours, Plumes of light that fill the evening sky
transcending the grey urban landscape into a scene of unimaginable beauty
The moon becomes our glitter ball, illuminating the deserted walkways, now our promenade
Frost chilled air warmed by your smile, soft iridescent skin brings the scent of spring and breaks the bleak mid winter
We embrace the Midnight hour, held fast as though to lose your touch would stop my heart that beats for you alone.
the breath of your whisper sends my aching body into raptures of untold pleasure
I lament the breaking sun that takes you , Dawns chorus has little joy for me.
while Icarus burns his wings on flights of fancy, I wait patiently for the blanket of darkness to return when the moon will once again be our
Glitter Ball
certaintyofchance certaintyofchance 41-45, M 18 Responses Jun 2, 2011

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Wow, really beautiful.

Thank you, I'ts nice of you to take the time, and to leave such a nice comment

I want to read this over and over

Thank you

I lost myself within your words... you created a delightful picture in my mind. Thank you for sharing this.. beautifully written.. a delight to read...

Such a glowing tribute.......Thank you your words are very much appreciated

Wow... I really, really like this...
I often find myself waiting for that same blanket of darkness

Oso.
You are to me both night and day

You just brought a smile to my face....thank you.

Thank you for sharing that sensitive poem.

It is a pleasure to share with a person such as you.
Thanks for taking the time to read.

i love your story, so touching

Thank you Streets for taking the time to read and leaving such a nice comment

YOU ARE SO WELCOME

I devoured this, the way your words flow is incredible
Amazing work!!

Viva.
Thank you for taking the time to read and leaving such a heart felt comment.

exquisite. your imagery is lovely. thank you. clearly a favourite now. kissesssssssssssss...

Thank you, Your comment was very much apprecaited

You just told my story, thank you, it was...Beautiful

Breeze I feel sure that your life and story are far more Beautiful than my work.
But I thank you for such a wonderful comment.

So beautiful!

My dear soul.
You are always so generous........from my heart I thank you.

Angelina.

Such a wonderful comment, you have my thanks

Beautifully written.... was easy to visualize in my mind and feel in my soul. A beautiful painting through words!

Beautifully written..:)

Thank you

You're welcome..

Oh my...This is beautiful

Thank you,

Beautiful poem you have the ability to paint picture with your words

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leaving a comment.

your welcome

I'm in awe. You have a talent for painting a picture with your words :)

Misty.
Thank you for such a wonderful comment

You're welcome :) It's very much deserved :)

wow, Chance...wow. i've been reading this piece since the day you posted it, trying to come up with the right words to leave as a comment. everything i could say falls short and sounds so completely ordinary by comparison. the irony is never missed when a beautfully written poem leaves me speechless. i know full well the yearning you so artfully depict in this piece. your talent for painting images through words is remarkable. thank you for sharing this gem. XOXOXO

Midnight should be so lucky to entertain a love such as this.

Pretty.
You are both the moon and the sun

How did you come to be so beautiful?