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♥ Invisible ♥

By: FlutterbyGurl
Written on March 19th, 2012
I am real but not here.
Maybe that's why I hurt.
And sometimes I fear this fate
Will only break my heart.
Is this all we do?
Sit around being mean?
Someday, together,
We will intervene for those in need.
No one will be invisible.
The world's sight will be renewed.
The thought will be fictional,
And never subdued.

♥ Sasha ♥
By: FlutterbyGurl
Age: 18-21 , Female
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4 responses
  • VoyeurPeepingTom
    VoyeurPeepingTom

    I am real - - - but not here... powerful

    Perhaps there are many of us on EP that are an interesting mix of real and unreal here - truth and fantasy - - - myth can be powerfully true in its own way.

    Mar 25, 2012
    2 likes
  • HallieParker
    HallieParker

    A nice poem. but the world is divided basically into to camps - those who care for others and those who don't. Your poem suggests those who don't will become members of the group that does care which is a great idea for a poem.

    Mar 20, 2012
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  • idlewatcher
    idlewatcher

    Well stated :)

    Mar 19, 2012
    2 likes
  • startingpointguard33
    startingpointguard33

    excellent. I finally wrote a poem for the first time tonight! You write a lot?

    Mar 19, 2012
    2 likes