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FOR YOU

DIVING
IN YOUR BODY
GOING THROUGH UNEXPLORED PLACES
FULL OF LOVE AND PASSION.

ENDLESS SOURCE
OF DREAMS AND FANTASIES
RAIN OF EMOTIONS
STORM OF PLEASURES...

LET ME OPEN THE DOOR OF PARADISE...

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Let me swim in paradise with you.

A sensual tale of one's desire to fall freely into the depths of her lover in the hopes of being one with him. Well done.

tendereyes, your words amaze me, you amaze me. Smiles

wow. Hmm. I love you.

Thanks. Wow. I didn't know heart can smile too. You too.

aww. Thanks TP. You are sweet too.

Wow Princess what an exprestion of love. <br />
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*IS IT GETTING HOT IN HERE*

more wows.

wow.

I vividly see the passion of two people meeting on a level not attained by many. Nicely written.

Nice. The imagination runs wild.

I can't add much as all of the above comments say it well. But I can say ... " let us go through the door together "

See now I loved that. If that was a poem written FOR someone, oh man. All I can say is that if I was on the recieving end of a poem like that...crazy **** would happen. Im just saying. <br />
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Anyway, your writing is lovely.

lovely