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For Souls That Cease To Exist

Sometimes there are souls who cease to really exist.
Its not their fault, the cards they're dealt
Make it too hard to persist.

Sometimes there are souls, who really try to live,
Its not their fault, the cards their dealt
mean they fail to give.

If life's a game, you fluke and win
still hard to make it through.
Spare a thought for those lost souls

So missunderstood.
deborahmichelle deborahmichelle 22-25, F 5 Responses Jul 28, 2012

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I like this one. Keep on writing. And welcome to EP! This is a vast, wonderful world! kisses....

<3 x

This poem speaks of a challenge!

http://www.experienceproject.com/stories/Write-Poetry/375909<br />
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Whew that took a while but I think that is most of the poems I have shared on here. And dont feel compelled to not read every one of those, I just tried to make a list so that I can read them whenever i feel like. Some of them I had forgotten about.

Dunno why first one does not show up as EP Link

http://www.experienceproject.com/stories/Write-Poetry/375909

No, there is nothing stopping me, except I have not had that feeling of writing a poem in so long. I will definitely give some more of yours a read. If you want to read mine they can be found in my stories but I think you will have to dig. Let me see if I get you the links.

Please do :)

I really like the thought of your poem. I miss the time I could put my thoughts into poems.

try it... just scribble... if you could do it once you can again... you will be surprised what comes together... even just start by writing words that rhyme, or words that match the theme of the poem you would like to write. YOU CAN DO IT&gt;&gt;&gt; whats stopping you?? This was dedicated to a friend of mine who committed suicide, so im really glad u like it. I have loads more on my page if u fancy a read? Peace x