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Sometimes

Sometimes its all I can take before I loose control
sometimes its all I can hanndle until I loose faith to my mind body and soul
sometimes it takes love to bring me back
sometimes that's not even enough given the energy I lack
sometimes I just need my voice to be heard
but sometimes I don't speak up so no one hears a word
sometimes I stumble to my addiction like its my last hope
sometimes I should realize by doing that I walk a tight rope
sometimes I think that rope will snap with all that it must weather
but sometimes within my loved ones I find the strength to thread it back together
sometimes I let others words get to me and I beat myself up about it
But sometimes I know I can't let them win and realize im my worst critic
sometimes I feel like dirt and question my own self worth
then sometimes I remember that I was meant to be a fighter from birth
sometimes a little push is all we need
but sometimes i find that noone else but myself can give me the complete strength to succeed
And then mabye when i can find the will power to believe that i can trust in myself more than sometimes , I can change sometimes to all the time.
poetvann poetvann 18-21, F 7 Responses Aug 11, 2012

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Sometimes we laugh while others cry
Sometimes we curse and say goodbye
Sometimes we love sometimes we fight
Sometimes I hold her thought the night
Sometimes we speak , yet we both know
where once was love, passed long ago

This is very good, I enjoyed reading this!

Speechless. My favorite so far!

Very expressive, thanks for sharing, and am sure, sometime soon, you will be able to trust in yourself all the time.

yes.......... SOMETIMES,

YOU simply FLOW... like this.... ♥

K hun thak you I fixed it :D

on the 7th line, I believe "know" should be "no". other than that, this is a great poem.. really strong and it shows a lot of emotion. keep up the great work (: