Tired

I'm tired of the tears,

that well in my eyes.

Tired of the thoughts,

that plague my troubled mind.

Tired of the pain,

with each beat of my heart.

Tired of the dread,

waiting to fall apart.

Tired of the loneliness,

that haunts my bedtime.

Tired of feeling like ****

when i should be feeling fine.

tired of feeling tired.

So tired of the time.

Just tired.. ever awake,

wishing for more time.

caroli9 caroli9
41-45, F
16 Responses May 9, 2007

keep writing is all I can say (: you have amazing talent

I love this so much

only just read this i feel exactly like this x

WELL DONE! took the words right out of my mouth! am so tard of feeling tard!!!!!

i so could relate very good

this is quitee a piece you do very much havee talent andd the relativity to youur poem presumed based on youur life actually reflects back on mineee! =] i LOVE it.

this is quitee a piece you do very much havee talent andd the relativity to youur poem presumed based on youur life actually reflects back on mineee! =] i LOVE it.

somrtimes things happen .. not every book is the same.

That's interesting. I've known a number of girls that write poetry as a way of moving on and they keep it closely guarded.

crazy thing is .. i only write poetry when im on here.. just sort of happens. the way i feel i just type it.

That is very touching. I see you wrote it some time ago. I hope things are brighter now.

thankyou Hh .. love your poetry :)

Hope your ok. and thankyou.

really beautiful, it epitomises everything I'm currently feeling

It was censored by the EP ... i was going to put Shite but i think they censor that too .. haha<br />
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Thankyou for your comment :)

*applauds* Very beautiful, madam. Quite moving.<br />
I find myself wondering, does the experience project policy make you censor that one word or did you do that yourself? The line of asterix's take away from the piece somewhat.