Screams..  fill my mind,

words claw at my eyes,

Wanting to explode

The ANGER is there

Don't want to let it go

Its tearing at my insides

its punching at my gut

DEEP BREATHS..... so i  b r e a t h e

Try to appease the beast...

Its stabbing at my heart !!!


ripping my soul apart....

the RAGE in my mind...

Eyes sore

wanting to cry...

Battered and Bruised inside,

on the outside i look fine.

The scars you cannot see.

the pain you cant set free.

caroli9 caroli9
41-45, F
6 Responses May 9, 2007

If you made a booklet of poems, i would definitely pay for it (;

so raw and true..

real talent

It can be very hard to express strong anger because people don't know how to handle it from someone else. <br />
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It can also be scary to let your anger out.<br />
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Glad you have paper or canvas :)

I noticed this entry here a while ago with out words, but now that there are I`ll say that it`s very intense and moving. I like all things where artistic ex<x>pression takes hold like that... it`s necessary. <br />
i wish i could do more hands on ex<x>pression like you, but mine have all become digital it this point. it really isn't the same...

I sometimes find it hard to express the feelings of anger, dissapointment and rage. And so just suck it all in. It does get to the stage of wanting to explode but I just suck it all in. And then in an explosive artistic moment i let it out on paper or canvas.