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I Write Poetry

I Have So Much Left To Say.....

By: lalakhan90
Written on October 24th, 2012
Age: 22-25 , Male
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33 responses
  • Hope1001

    OMG!! This is BEAUTIFULLY BEAUTIFUL!!!
    One of my favorite! I love it.
    Keep it up :)

    Apr 21
    2 likes
  • LifeisDeathisLife

    That was beautiful It makes me think of what just happened to me

    Feb 23
    1 like
    • lalakhan90

      Thankx...:)
      whatever that happened is past......everyday is a new day...a new opportunity
      so go out and live every moment....life is too short.:)

      Feb 24
      1 like
    • LifeisDeathisLife

      : ) I will thank you

      Feb 24
      1 like
  • basy

    nice thanks

    Feb 17
    1 like
  • elyiesmama

    love the way thats written

    Jan 19
    2 likes
  • InaudibleRage

    I like this poem a lot. Well done.

    Dec 24, 2012
    2 likes
    • lalakhan90

      thank you so much..:))

      Dec 24, 2012
      1 like
  • vcost1

    I'm sad

    Dec 24, 2012
    1 like
    • vcost1

      In a way we all view love the same. One love

      Dec 24, 2012
      1 like
    • lalakhan90

      yeah...one love..:)

      Dec 24, 2012
      1 like
  • eyesofatragedy

    I respect the honesty.
    Sometimes words don't suffice. But I appreciate that you try. Trying is what sets us apart.

    Dec 19, 2012
    1 like
    • lalakhan90

      yeah you're right...
      Thank you.:)

      Dec 20, 2012
      1 like
  • nadeemahmed263

    i liked ur poem dude,keep it up!

    Nov 1, 2012
    2 likes
  • Pyrellia

    Lovely and sweet poem. I love how it actually tells the story. Great job. ^_^…

    Oct 27, 2012
    2 likes
    • lalakhan90

      Hey thankx..:))

      Oct 28, 2012
      1 like
    • Pyrellia

      You're welcome. ^_^…

      Oct 28, 2012
      1 like
  • maimoona183

    Maine kabhi us shaks ko hasil hi nahi kiya,

    Phir bhi har pal yeh lagta hai, ki maine usse kho diya..

    Oct 24, 2012
    4 likes
  • AngelAisha

    Fab poetry......... beautifully penned.

    Oct 24, 2012
    2 likes
  • thequeenofeverything

    Beautiful. I loved it!

    Oct 24, 2012
    3 likes
  • carlee1212

    Very beautiful. I really like the end.

    Oct 24, 2012
    3 likes
  • SupermanDC

    Lovely Poem about a special girl ...

    Oct 24, 2012
    3 likes
    • lalakhan90

      yeah shes special...

      Oct 25, 2012
      1 like
  • poetvann

    Nice print, the expression came out pretty good as well

    Oct 24, 2012
    3 likes
  • spencer2129

    very nice...so hurry up and tell her :)

    Oct 24, 2012
    3 likes
  • ionezation

    Marvellous man ! i really scared to suffer this :S it would be my first n last !

    Oct 24, 2012
    2 likes
  • Lushiro

    I like this.

    Oct 24, 2012
    3 likes
  • Abeautifulheart

    love it!....so much left to say...reminds me of the quote that goes, what s worse to have said something and wished we hadn t...or didn t say something and wished we had....

    Oct 24, 2012
    3 likes
    • lalakhan90

      you gave the central idea of my poem...:))

      Oct 24, 2012
      1 like
  • littlewolf1

    it's beautiful ^.^

    Oct 24, 2012
    2 likes
  • thisaccountisgone

    This is so beautiful

    Oct 24, 2012
    1 like