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The Woman Of One Day

By: grayday104
Written on November 14th, 2012
Age: 22-25 , Male
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    1OOO

    awwww

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      grayday104

      If only she was real right?

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      1OOO

      right :)

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      grayday104

      So have you found your Mr. Right?

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      1OOO

      i'm married :(

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      grayday104

      So then why the long face?

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      1OOO

      cause I never love him completely :/

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      grayday104

      So then why get married?

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      1OOO

      crazy... I was

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      grayday104

      So what about divorce?

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      1OOO

      not possible for me

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      grayday104

      Why is that?

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      1OOO

      I don't have the heart or the guts for a divorce

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      grayday104

      Well you could always just bail

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    inluv28

    I hope you find your love

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      grayday104

      Me too : (

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    inluv28

    Beautiful poetry. Sad though. You need to take control and speak up before you.lose the chance...if I interpreted this right:)

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      grayday104

      It's not about a woman I know but a woman I hope to find

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    AThousandLifetimes

    You know whats wrong with the thought.
    You want something out of a romance novel....But what you don't know is that that is not the one and only kind of passionate true love.
    She might be standing right there in front of you and you will never know her because theres no spark? There is a slow kind of love...that grows and then never dies.

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      grayday104

      Was I asking for advice?

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      AThousandLifetimes

      Neither was it one. ;)
      It was a critical comment.

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      grayday104

      My poems are just me venting shouldn't be taken seriously

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    MystiqBlue

    Aww I see it is the woman you love through the pen.. erm, I hope you don't give up golds for the seconds to hold her in your dreams. Wish it happens for real with a real woman soon, as perfect as in your pen!!
    Good luck with that :))

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      grayday104

      Oh I think my poems show I'm far from perfect but thanks : )

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      MystiqBlue

      Does it? But it is good that you see your life in such a perfect sense.. Not many does this :))

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      grayday104

      Well I have talked about burying bodies by pale moonlight

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      MystiqBlue

      sssshhssh yo fool.. leaked the plan on a public forum :X

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      grayday104

      I'm sorry my bad : (

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      MystiqBlue

      PLAN B

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      grayday104

      I think we missed a step there

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      MystiqBlue

      O.o

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      grayday104

      You do know what Plan B is right?

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      MystiqBlue

      I wanted us to proceed with PLAN B :|]

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      grayday104

      Plan B is a form of birth control also referred to as The Morning After Pill

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      MystiqBlue

      hahhaa I never knew about 'your' plan =P

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      grayday104

      Well now you do! = P

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      MystiqBlue

      Your master objects// Try to be a good attendant next time..

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      grayday104

      What do you mean by master objects?

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      MystiqBlue

      you are too lame to be an attendant *time to hire a new one*

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      grayday104

      Lame like retarded?

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      MystiqBlue

      lame like asking too many questions

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      grayday104

      Well if that's how you feel

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      MystiqBlue

      :(.. let us have a happy ending =)

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      RedQueenz

      why didn't I understand any of it? :(

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      grayday104

      I don't know this is a really easy one to understand

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      RedQueenz

      what I mean is your convo.. not the poem :P

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      grayday104

      Yeah I know that now lol : )

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    Sleepy7

    U got a way with words n that's getting u somewhere In this life :)

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      grayday104

      I hope so! : )

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    BrokenHeartShatteredSoul

    Amazing

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      grayday104

      Well not to toot my own horn but I've been at it since 11

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      BrokenHeartShatteredSoul

      Nice I've been a writer since I was 10 and got better in 3years I intend to continue till I am past my peak

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      grayday104

      Okay but just remember puberty is a very distracting time

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      BrokenHeartShatteredSoul

      Yeah, believe me I know

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      grayday104

      Yeah I know what that's like trust me : )

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      BrokenHeartShatteredSoul

      The drama does provide good material for lyrics and poems though :)

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    silentsinfulangel

    im speechless

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      grayday104

      Lol I didn't think that was possible with women! : )

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      silentsinfulangel

      aww

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      grayday104

      I'm just goofing around This is the first romantic poem I ever started

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    Unicorn85

    So beautifully written, the sadness that quells inside the broken heart will speak of love with such tender despite being thorn. Please continue to write your poems, they are very inspirational. Have a great day

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      grayday104

      Thank you! That's one of best compliments I've ever gotten! : )

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    Rapture82

    That was lovely. You have a wonderful gift!

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      grayday104

      Thanks it's amazing how much pain comes from my gift

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      Rapture82

      The burden of an artist is a heavy load, but from great sorrow can come amazing work.

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      grayday104

      Lol sounds like something I would say

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      Rapture82

      Great minds! ;)

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      grayday104

      Okay don't tell me you're into girls too? Unless you are then I'd like it if you'd go into detail please?

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    SkidlelyBoeBoe

    Good one

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      grayday104

      Thanks this is one of my personal favs

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    SerendipitySmile

    Now grayday, this is good. It's like a prayer you have said to God above. It will happen one day. Especially when she finds out that you have been thinking of her before you even met her. That is cool! Keep up the writing and put it all together in a book. Great job!

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      grayday104

      Thanks that made me plush I never had it described like that I don't know just made me feel powerful Now all bow before my mightiness! lol

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    faeryflutterthe1andonly

    Too bad writing comes from such pain and longing...

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      grayday104

      Believe me I know

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    ProudofMylove

    This poem is.... Amazing, I... It brought me to tears. Beautiful.. Really beautiful.

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      grayday104

      Thanks it actually kinda saddens me knowing I've never had that and please rate up the ones you enjoy

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    NatashaRosee

    This is a beautiful poem you've written.

    I enjoy how depthful it is :)

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      grayday104

      Thanks it's hard to pine over who you've never had please rate up the ones you like

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      NatashaRosee

      Rated this up :)

      You're welcome.

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      grayday104

      Almost forgot Hi!

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      NatashaRosee

      It's okay, I forget too, all the time on here, haha.

      Hello :)

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    Pyrellia

    Aww, hun...Now see, that's the kind of feeling I want a guy to feel towards me. This is officially one of my top favorites. I love your poems. Especially this one. ^_^

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      grayday104

      Thanks I wasn't really expecting to ever hear from you again

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      Pyrellia

      What?! Like I could honestly up and quit talking to you..? Yeah, right. I'm just having a bunch of ups and downs and don't want to seem like I just want to complain about them to you. But, even though I don't always message, I always read things you post. ^_^

      Jan 24
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    simplygirl

    Beautiful, grayday.

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      grayday104

      thanks that never gets old

      Jan 24
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      simplygirl

      I know. I connected with this story.

      Jan 24
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      grayday104

      yeah this poem I connect with 2nd most out of all them kinda hurts me to read it sometimes

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    Sol05

    Beautiful :)

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      grayday104

      Thank you and there's many more if you want to check out more

      Jan 16
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    thesphinxess

    did you find her?

    Dec 30, 2012
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      grayday104

      No not yet but I hope this makes me less scary lol

      Dec 30, 2012
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      thesphinxess

      you hope? why?

      Dec 30, 2012
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      grayday104

      I just like making a good impression

      Dec 30, 2012
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      thesphinxess

      i see

      Dec 30, 2012
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      grayday104

      Do you now?

      Dec 30, 2012
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      thesphinxess

      can i really say all that i think here? lol....

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    stonesteve

    Amazing dude.. You're the best.
    "Wounded and abandoned I was clouded with gloom. Your couplet so strong I believe now I can bloom. Now I cannot stop thinking about pygmalion's tale. And pray that devoted lover like him must never fail." :-)

    Dec 30, 2012
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      grayday104

      Thanks where does your quote come from?

      Dec 30, 2012
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    shap36

    nice

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    LadyBronte

    Lovely.

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    AllStarcrushNate

    Oh, bravo! Terrific! We think exactly alike! That's just how I feel about the girl of my dreams.

    Dec 29, 2012
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      grayday104

      Thanks I appreciate it I guess it's easy to see why my sis thinks of me as old fashioned

      Dec 29, 2012
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    GrownGirlUp

    Grayday104, your dream is such a nice one. I really hope you find her...or she finds you... for an eternity...not just a moment.

    Dec 23, 2012
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    KaylaWinter

    Wow! Thats all i can say. I love it. Do you write poetry often?

    Dec 17, 2012
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      grayday104

      Yeah I've been writing for years started when I was 11 and just never stopped You see that! the beauty liked what I wrote! Awesome!

      Dec 17, 2012
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    JerfoneMnLCBZTE

    I wish I could write that much, I will today. I'm going to nothing will stop me.

    Dec 6, 2012
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      grayday104

      Well I've had alot of time to practice

      Dec 6, 2012
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      JerfoneMnLCBZTE

      Well this will be my third poem when it's finished and how long would you guess you have had to practise? I do a lot of different things and can't stick to one soo well yeah I just deal with what I feel I should so maybe it won't be done today or tommorow but it will be, I never let someone down and never want to. Never. I've see what it feels like.

      Dec 6, 2012
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      JerfoneMnLCBZTE

      Seen*

      Dec 6, 2012
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      grayday104

      Since 11 so more then half my life

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    lookingwindow

    My heart is broken, for a token of chance
    I stand by now and watch from a glance.
    Your breath still warm on my breast, I
    now aimlessly wonder without any rest.
    My soul is weary and feels to flee, to a
    place where one is free...

    Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Did you write that and if so what was the intent behind it?

      Dec 3, 2012
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      lookingwindow

      I did. We can talk privately about the intent.

      Dec 3, 2012
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    Unchainedthoughts

    Seems like it was written from the heart :)

    Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Yes this poem cause confliction in me it reminds me of who I wait for and tortures me cause I haven't found her

      Dec 3, 2012
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      Unchainedthoughts

      Seems like the longing sometimes articulate the deep desire :) it's better to know yourself during this journey rather than to never know & just get in to something you don't know whether you even wanted.

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Oh I know myself well I just don't have much peace in my life all just wading through chaos it would just be nice to have a source of stability in my life

      Dec 3, 2012
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      Unchainedthoughts

      It is apparent that you know what you want ...your words are loud and clear.

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Yeah it's just the process of finding it "The seeker,the hunt and the find treasures lost left behind"

      Dec 3, 2012
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    GaLyeLLow

    keep it cool, don't be on rush,
    sometimes love takes more than a blush,
    this is actually like a long distance affair,
    you live in the present and she's in the future in her lair,
    time will come you'll be riding on a ship,
    that will take you to her, and make her yours to keep.
    :))

    Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      That was cute did you write that?

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      yep, just now, felt inspired, to write, it takes mood you know. :)

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Yeah I know the feeling if I wanted to use that would I have your permission?

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      sure, no worries, feel free to do so, i know you can make it better. hehehe, :D

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Anyone else have a case of deja vu?

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      wow. :O, no sir nothing in particular,
      hmm, just live a joyful life. :))

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Well I'm here if you ever want to talk about something

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      deja vu.. hmm i knew i had but i forgot what was it. :P,
      y did u ask sir?

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Your message it kind of glitched I had already read it but was notified about it a second time as if it were a new message

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      maybe it's you who wanna talk about something?, actually this poem gave me the idea not just missing someone, but more of longing. :)

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      But does longing who you've never had make you crazy? and I suggested talking cause you don't look happy in your pic

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      i have other pics, where in i smile, lol,. :D
      i have longed for someone whom i never had, like my future husband. ;)
      seriously, i have a special notebook for him, where in i write my thoughts about him, and how i long for his presence in the future, and hopefully, when the time is right, i'll definitely show it to him, how each day i prepared myself up to the day that we'll be together. :P thought you just have to know.

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      And how have you pictured your future husband?

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      GaLyeLLow

      pictured?, does it mean physically?
      well, i don't remember .. i mean, i don't just like a blank photo. :))

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Physically or personally how ever you'd like to answer

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      nice arms capable of protecting me or hugging me when i need/don't need it.
      with eyes that see the beauty of anything or at least choose to.
      mouth/lips that speak of kindness.
      feet that are willing to walk or stand up everytime he falls, :)
      mind capable of going through tough times, and he may not be perfect but at least he hopes to be, in the best way possible. :)

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      how come the first letter get's omitted? sorry for that sir.

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Hmm I'm not sure if that was meant as a pass at me

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      pass at me?, explain further, hey you're in my circle, but i can't find you online. :P

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      pass. pass.pass.

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      I think one of our connections is kinda faulty and I wasn't sure if you were making a pass at me cause it sounded like you were describing me

      Dec 3, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      i want to tell you more about it but. i gotta go though , catch up with you sir some other time.:) byebye

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      K bye

      Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      So when are you going to finish the story?

      Dec 5, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      in the near future. :)

      Dec 5, 2012
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      grayday104

      Well you might want to take a second look at this poem

      Dec 5, 2012
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      GaLyeLLow

      i may read it again once or twice,
      all i can say is that it was totally nice,
      the feelings you had may be folly or truth,
      just plant a seed of hope in your heart,
      and one day you'll see a priceless fruit.
      :)

      Dec 5, 2012
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      grayday104

      I think its a bit of both folly and truth truth isn't always reasonable

      Dec 5, 2012
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    joyba61

    you got it bad...but i can see where you are coming from...

    Dec 3, 2012
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      grayday104

      Yeah unfortunately I'm not a big enough ***** to be in love

      Dec 3, 2012
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