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Edge Of The World

By: Lushiro
Written on November 19th, 2012
By: Lushiro
Age: 18-21
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    papri

    beautiful!

    Nov 22, 2012
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      Lushiro

      Thank you once again :) always more!

      Nov 22, 2012
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    2011A

    I love it except for that silly ninja turtle. God. Change it please. Hard to concentrate on the beauty of your words with a questioning ninja turtle! kissessssssssssssssss.....*giggles*

    Nov 19, 2012
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      Lushiro

      LOL

      Nov 19, 2012
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      2011A

      Let me tell you this funny story about them. When J. was little we lived in Toronto, and one Hallowe'en, he dressed as a Power Ranger. The ninja turtles were soooooooooo popular then. We saw them on the streets! All the kids were so delighted. J. said I watch them on TV. I did not know they lived in my neighbourhood. *laughing* So sweet at that age! He was 4. Love you, too. xoxo

      Nov 19, 2012
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    MorningBreeze

    wonderful! well said! Thank you, it's one of the best I have read here.

    Nov 19, 2012
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      Lushiro

      Wow thank you! That's a big compliment ^_^ I have many more if you'd like to read them.

      Nov 19, 2012
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    garvan

    Lovely,just perfect :-)

    Nov 19, 2012
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      Lushiro

      Thank you Garvan :)

      Nov 19, 2012
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