I Write Poetry

My Riddled Wish

By: grayday104

Written on November 19th, 2012

I am a puzzler riddled with pain
What in life do I hunt in vain
Try to decipher my little twist
Find the heart of this riddled wish
Riddle me this riddle me that
Here's the teaser I want you crack
A winged rat the feisty feline
What is shared besides capers and crime
What is free with complexity
The greatest of all mysteries
A blissful enigma of uncertainty
Hoorah at least you've reached the end
What do I want to have and defend?
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35 responses

passat91

not bad :/

5 days ago
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- grayday104
  So didn't you like about it ?
  
  5 days ago
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- passat91
  I was using my cell phone to write the above comment. I tried to make a ":)" but mistakely made a ":/" sorry about it.. I liked it :=)
  
  4 days ago
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- grayday104
  Oh it's fine I appreciate you taking the time to clear things up : )
  
  4 days ago
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- passat91
  thank you :)
  
  3 days ago
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DreamyAlice

Beautiful.

Apr 20
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- grayday104
  Thanks glad you enjoyed there's many more here to check out if you'd like keep reading such as http://www.experienceproject.com/stories/Write-Poetry/3114690
  
  Apr 20
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Shadowroza

wow... really good and I love the use of the vocabulary you use

Feb 16
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- grayday104
  Thanks please rate up the ones you like
  
  Feb 16
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- Shadowroza
  ofcoarse ^^
  
  Feb 16
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- grayday104
  Thanks again
  
  Feb 16
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- Shadowroza
  anytime ^^
  
  Feb 16
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- grayday104
  Anytime you say?
  
  Feb 16
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- Shadowroza
  yesh ^_^
  
  Feb 16
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- grayday104
  Yeah so how is now for you? I'd love to have you now
  
  Feb 16
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- Shadowroza
  I'll comment on any poems if you want ^^
  
  Feb 16
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- grayday104
  Aww you really had me going
  
  Feb 16
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- Shadowroza
  I did? O_O
  
  Feb 16
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- grayday104
  See men can be confusing too!
  
  Feb 16
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- Shadowroza
  hmm... very confusing lol @_@
  
  Feb 16
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- grayday104
  But it was good for you too right?
  
  Feb 16
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Pyrellia

Ooh...Let me guess. A girl of your dreams that you can completely understand and her understand you back, and can be open and honest with..? Am I close..? ^_^
Psst...By the way. I love this riddled poem.

Jan 25
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- grayday104
  Yeah I should probably make it harder next time and God bless Edward Nigma!
  
  Jan 25
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$fractalpterodactyl$

fractalpterodactyl

Wow u write so well!! I'm alittle envious!!

Dec 23, 2012
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- grayday104
  believe me there's nothing to be envious about
  
  Dec 23, 2012
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- $fractalpterodactyl$
  
  fractalpterodactyl
  What ev :-p
  
  Dec 23, 2012
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- grayday104
  trust me it hurts writing about what you haven't felt
  
  Dec 23, 2012
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- $fractalpterodactyl$
  
  fractalpterodactyl
  Oh trust me iv felt it I know how it is. I'm just trying to say u write very well & have a good way of using words. I definitely wasn't trying to dismiss your thoughts & feelings. Cuz I understand what ur saying & feeling. Just keep being ur sweet self, she's out there :)
  
  Dec 23, 2012
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- grayday104
  I can only hope
  
  Dec 24, 2012
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lookingwindow

You want a relationship, and you're tired because you haven't found it yet.....Hugs:)))

Dec 19, 2012
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- grayday104
  yeah it just gets harder as people keep telling me I'll find her soon how soon is soon?
  
  Dec 19, 2012
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- lookingwindow
  Do you have a current groups of associates/friends to vent too,and get some quality
  feedback from?
  
  Dec 19, 2012
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- grayday104
  nope
  
  Dec 19, 2012
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soulrunher

I enjoyed this. Good job! :)

Nov 19, 2012
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- grayday104
  Thanks
  
  Nov 19, 2012
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