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Humilia Connectivosis

By: Lushiro
Written on November 21st, 2012
By: Lushiro
Age: 18-21 , Male
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  • 2011A

    Exquisite! LOVE THIS! Carlos and I have always been Ones. That is true. kissessssssssssssssssss......xoxo

    Dec 25, 2012
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    • 2011A

      Lushiro: You and are are ......For lack of better words...Kindred spirits. Love you, too. xox

      Dec 25, 2012
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  • calvinunmaker

    we are friend and enemy we are honest and liars we are nothing and everything we are and are not

    Nov 24, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Exactly. So well put.

      Nov 24, 2012
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    • Thekidsmom

      Loved this addition to the poem.

      Dec 25, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Updated! ^-^ should've added that a while ago =D

      Dec 25, 2012
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    • 2011A

      I love R. But we are not liars. That is not true. The rest is appropos...Lying never is. The truth is the only purity we have. For that I am grateful. xoxo

      Dec 25, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      To know the truth we must see the lie first correct? We all lie from time to time...that is human nature.

      Dec 25, 2012
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  • flurry1

    Brilliantly insightful written by someone so young

    Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Lol. Thank you :)

      Nov 23, 2012
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  • Tarxarin

    Oh? everyone else may be:(high pitched girl voice) oh lushiro thats such a good poem! will you marry me?(lol seriousish now) I won't lie its a good poem. But i can write better..........hehe.My mind is not blown. (pokes head) i still feel that in their its fully intact. By now my mind has been shot to hell so much almost nothing can break it now that i finaly duct taped it back together!

    Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      o.o

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      I am as hardcore as they come my pro bro! En garde! show me what godzilla can do! show me your epicness!? (i am completely being a silly now)

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Lol you are indeed a frivolous one. :) I decline. *Walks away into the shadowy evanescence*

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      i challenge you to a poem duel! i say the date will be on Christmas. We will agree on a topic and put on a two poems one from each. We shall share them with EP as our Christmas gift. We shall see whose poem is more poem like?! come on even if you don't accept my challenge how can you turn down a chance to unleash such a gift upon EP?!

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      ...Very well.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      But technically...I do so everyday.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i lured lushiro into a trap of creativeity and he knew it before he even walked into it! OH YEAH! SCORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what topic?

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      The topic will be "Love." :)

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      or "Empathy."

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      it's settled love in empathy that happens to us daily in every moment. Dark, yet light.lets do this!

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      :)

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      how do we decide a winner?

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      btw i dont mean to be rude with the challenge. I believe people get closer by silly, simple, rivalry. It makes people better. Its the way god wrote nature.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Of course. Albeit...I'm quite tired, drained myself today... :/
      There will be no winner.
      There is no rivalry.
      There is only connectivity with our poetic might. For the audience to enjoy and interconnect with our synergies.
      To achieve human connection.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      roar......knew you'd say that........i am very high energy ill refrain from going any crazier anyway bed calls name soon it will be time for sleep.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      same here, deuces.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      face it were EP addicts.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Dragon3lf

      Apparently you love the word synergy. Συν+έργο, συνεργεία, συν+ενέργεια.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      WHAT?

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Dragon3lf

      It's greek. Synergy= syn+ergo, syn+energeia.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Wow awesome o.o
      Yes it's my favorite terminology to describe energy+emotion+connection.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      yes but i never said anything about the word synergy.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Dragon3lf

      I was talking to Lushiro, Tarxarin. I'm glad you like my language :)

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Gotta cut this close guys :/ take care lol.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      writting my concept poem for my masterpiece poem now!

      Nov 23, 2012
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  • Joseph84

    Nice..I like it...although my first gut response was going to be something sarcastic like..what, did you get married? But I will be serious..I liked it

    Nov 22, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      ROFL thanks :P

      Nov 22, 2012
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  • jatpack3

    Very powerful message.

    Nov 22, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Haha packed a PUNCH didn't see that coming didja Mr. Psychic ;)

      Nov 22, 2012
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  • Dragon3lf

    One. I wish I could feel one with everything all the time. But I can't. I'm weak.

    Nov 22, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Takes time and patience or I was born to endure them all or maybe my sensory of emotions increased overtime. I can handle it since my empathy allows me to configure and calibrate emotions and charter them to my desire or preference.

      Nov 22, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      you do realize you dont tweak other peoples emotions. Just your perceptions? at least thats what i understand of empathy.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      That wasn't the idea...besides my empathy clearly cannot do that, it purges apathy/negativity.

      Nov 23, 2012
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    • Tarxarin

      night Lushiro the Hero. save many souls tonight.

      Nov 23, 2012
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