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Sacrifice Of Humanity

By: Lushiro
Written on December 14th, 2012
By: Lushiro
Age: 18-21 , Male
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  • SilentBluemoon

    Beautiful spectrum of divinity and faith. A true joy.

    Jan 8
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  • cpgnatly

    I like how choice is revealed to be independent of religion and completely dependent on the good and evil of it.

    Dec 28, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Exactly.

      Dec 28, 2012
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  • foreverxyoung

    Have you ever tried to get any of your work published?

    Dec 20, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      I don't know where to start.

      Dec 20, 2012
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    • foreverxyoung

      I don't know if they still do, but they used to have poetry contests in the backs of magazines...you know, with the advertisements and whatnot. You could also search online...If you google 'how to get poems published' you could find some ideas too. Also, if you know of an english teacher from your high school or a college, you could ask them. Most of the time, english professors know of various ways to get published, whether you're wanting to get your poems out there, short stories, or a novel. None of them would mind you contacting them, even if you aren't a student! ^_^

      Dec 20, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      I've tried doing that and it's a very complicated process evidently...but I like the english references. I'll see what else I can do. :) Thanks for the tips! :D

      Dec 20, 2012
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    • foreverxyoung

      No problemo! Good luck!

      Dec 20, 2012
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  • jatpack3

    Very visual in my head.

    Dec 19, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Wow really? o.o

      Dec 19, 2012
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  • MikeWinther

    Can you hold this moment by yourself if it comes too this

    Dec 16, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Yes indeed Mikey :)

      Dec 16, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      without hesitation.

      Dec 16, 2012
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    • MikeWinther

      Heat still burn you....

      Dec 16, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      In the best way now, the fire of protection and compassion.

      Dec 16, 2012
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    • MikeWinther

      Imagine the next moment now :)

      Dec 16, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      One day at a time! :D

      Dec 16, 2012
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    • MikeWinther

      Surprising contrast from being terrified a couple weeks ago

      Dec 16, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Lmao I agree..It's amazing what confidence boosts can do to a person lol! :P I'm willing to do what it takes to set things right again...for the greater good :)

      Dec 16, 2012
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  • emdi

    Very nice

    Dec 15, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Thank you! :D

      Dec 15, 2012
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  • Thatsmystyle77

    It was so poetic.. u have plans to write professionally? :)

    Dec 15, 2012
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  • Jay04Sch

    wow ..... Yet never seize to amaze me you are very talented and wise. Very, very beautiful. A poet at heart.

    Dec 15, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Thank you Jay :) I appreciate the warm compliment! :D

      Dec 15, 2012
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  • indrek

    awesome fireworks!

    Dec 15, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Lol!

      Dec 15, 2012
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  • cherryxblossom

    "Emanating wavering spectacles of luminosity and shadows sparkle and fade simultaneously."

    I really loved that line. It conjured a remarkable image in my mind when I read it....

    Dec 14, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

      Dec 14, 2012
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  • SmilesGoForMiles

    Wow....this is talent.

    Dec 14, 2012
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  • Occulta

    You my darling are an inspiration
    At least to me, you are...

    Dec 14, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Thank you :)

      Dec 14, 2012
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  • SupermanDC

    This so well written and thanks for sharing it. Wow ...

    Dec 14, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      Thank you :D

      Dec 14, 2012
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  • Darkon1side

    That was like... Perfect!

    Dec 14, 2012
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  • 2011A

    Wow. Exquisite. Love this one. Your imagery is superb. Your mastery of words, brilliant. Lushiro, You must write a book of poetry. Please. I would buy it. Many would. Thank you for this. Inspirational. Motivational. Sensational. I love you, Lushiro. Thank you for your words. kissesssssssssssssssssssssss.........xoox

    Dec 14, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      LOL I will someday XD

      Dec 14, 2012
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  • badbinary

    I love this. This year I've felt very much torn between light and dark forces at times and you know this is something im really interested in atm. Needing to work outside my usual zones. I really enjoyed your slant on it my friend. Great writing =)

    Dec 14, 2012
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    • Lushiro

      I was supernaturally compelled to write this piece, it just slapped my imagination to put it into poetry! o.O Thanks for reading Baddy, now look at the one called The Hero and Villain Within, you'll like that one too. :)

      Dec 14, 2012
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