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This Is What I Feel About You

A blazing comet, the sea is alive,
This is what I feel about you
Snakes and ladders, bullets and knives,
This is what I feel about you
Occam's razor is cutting your wrist,
This is what I feel about you
A bird flies free on a gentle summer breeze,
This is what I feel about you.

Two lost souls drift on haunted tunes
Dancing in the forest by the light of the Moon
Like thunder and lightning, theres a storm coming soon
This is what I feel about you.
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hemm... i think you can do much better with it...i am not satisfied!

LOL I second this :)

Wow wow wow and wow!!!!!! That is so beautiful. I've been trying to find some inspiration to write a poem but jeez you just nailing it stunning