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Her head rested on my slow beating chest, as I stroke her arm and feel her breathing.
I will protect her.
I love her softly when we lay, I just wait for the day to wisp away.
I will love her.
We hope that our time here, together may last forever.
Together.
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-Darkon1side

This is my first real poem I hope you like it
Darkon1side Darkon1side 18-21, M 7 Responses Jan 6, 2013

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This is simply powerful. Great poem! Is it true? Or just fantasy? It is beauty of words..Thank you for sharing your first with us! Do write more.

:D Nate!!!! I am lookin for ur name in poetty books soon!

:D

No
Joke!

Best one I've read so far it's easy to feel the feelings here

It's also my first

Yeah I read that it's probably why this works it's raw

:)

When it comes to poetry people react to feeling give them a reason to feel

Yes sir

Aw come on I'm much too young for Sir right?

Ok mister

Sounds like something you'd call a stranger danger lol

Naw me and pedos be chillln :3

This is the part where you scream I need an adult! I need an adult!

Naw I'll just bend over for you

Dude you're making me look bad

Sorry

It's cool you just went kinda overboard with that one

:)

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it's really pretty good poem

Thanks

pretty :)

Beautiful

Thx

wow i like it (:

Thx and wht you like about it ?

relateable and it sounds beautiful

Thx :)

plan to write more?

Yes acually

awesome, ill definitely read

Thx, really :)

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