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I Write Poetry

Forgiveness And Redemption

By: drksideofthemoon
Written on January 6th, 2013
Age: 51-55 , Male
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23 responses
  • SerendipitySmile

    I just think this is so beautiful!

    Jan 11
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  • OoLunaoO

    Deja vu ...
    there is something about it but I can't quite put my finger on it

    Jan 7
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  • silentwriter180

    Very deep & resonating

    Jan 6
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  • ParamoreJadore
    Jan 6
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  • ParamoreJadore

    well its rainy day music, I listen to all kinds of music, this one band does not tell the complete story of who I am, but you know if you look @ someones collection it often speaks volumes...
    I was listening to " your silences betrays you

    Jan 6
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  • ParamoreJadore

    I liked this very much, I read it while listening to the band Mojave, it was a nice mix. Keep writing.

    Jan 6
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    • drksideofthemoon

      Thanks for the comment, and Im looking that band up.

      Jan 6
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  • clarkee

    really nice, have you thought of putting it to music?

    Jan 6
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    • drksideofthemoon

      It's odd that you say that, I actually write my poetry as if they were songs.

      Jan 6
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  • Sungirl3

    Beautiful... :)

    Jan 6
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  • DreamingTaoTiger

    You wrote this yourself? (serious question)

    Jan 6
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    • drksideofthemoon

      I'm almost embarassed to admit it, but yes, I wrote it.

      Jan 6
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    • DreamingTaoTiger

      Ah good, I have never met a man or a woman to write a single piece of poetry by himself/herself that was wonderful that he/she didn't hate himself/herself. I am impressed , I enjoyed reading it very much. It had meaning to me, and it sparked something, that is all one can ask from a poem no?

      Jan 6
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    • drksideofthemoon

      To make someone feel is the goal of a writer. It doesn't matter if the reader likes or hates the piece, when that happens the writer has done their job.

      Jan 6
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    • DreamingTaoTiger

      EXACTLY! You just earned a lot of respect as a writer with me. A lot indeed!

      Jan 6
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    • leantannedguy

      You have just run across probably the best writer I have seen on EP....bar none. IMHO.

      Jan 8
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