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A Fade To Black

By: grayday104
Written on January 6th, 2013
Age: 22-25 , Male
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  • 3rdfloorgirl

    All the things that make good theater, mystery, murder, doom, and a madman. Too bad at the start it was meant to be a comedy.

    I likes this, but not as much as some of your others. I know you say that many of your poems are not from actual experiences you have faced, but they have so much feeling behind them anyway. This one seemed impersonal somehow where others are like you are laying it all on the line for your poetry.

    Apr 14
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    • grayday104

      I understand that and I think Comedy should have passion too

      Apr 14
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    • 3rdfloorgirl

      Absolutely, as any great drama needs a little humor.

      Apr 14
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    • grayday104

      Have you read my new one yet?

      Apr 14
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    • 3rdfloorgirl

      yes i rated it up :)

      Apr 14
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    • grayday104

      Sorry I have poor memory me bad : (

      Apr 14
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    • 3rdfloorgirl

      it is ok...i only shed a few tears, being so forgettable.

      Apr 14
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    • grayday104

      Thanks for understanding

      Apr 14
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    • 3rdfloorgirl

      :) anytime

      Apr 14
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  • BellezzaV

    Hmmmmm

    Mar 30
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  • SkidlelyBoeBoe

    Creepy

    Jan 24
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    • grayday104

      Yeah but it wasn't creepy just to be creepy

      Jan 24
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    • SkidlelyBoeBoe

      What she a bad actress?

      Jan 24
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    • grayday104

      Yes all of them were they were acting just to act no passion

      Jan 24
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    • SkidlelyBoeBoe

      Ha

      Jan 25
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  • Darkon1side

    I like the feel of this

    Jan 10
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