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Her Death Brought Her Life

By: thisaccountisgone
Written on January 9th, 2013
Age: 18-21 , Female
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  • Cut12

    Wow I love your poem it made me cry because it reminds me of myself like a lot I to really want to commit suiside I just cant do it because of my friend monkey he to wants to do it but I made a promise to him that if I dont do it nither will he and I don't want him to have to u know do it because I did I feel your pain

    Feb 18
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  • patdn1fan

    to religous but beuatiful

    Feb 17
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  • goldieke

    Wauw, This is so Beautiful xx

    Feb 16
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  • ChrisTKringel

    Hi, I'm concerned for you based on your pretty expressive poem. Please write me personally if you want to talk with someone. I promise not to lecture or give the same tired advice. I have something incredible I will share with you but I would need an email address as it comes with many attachments. You are not alone! ChrisTKringel

    Feb 15
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  • jesussaves2013

    Very beautiful.

    Feb 12
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  • Hoodpierced

    This made me cry a heartfelt cry. Someone very close to me would cut herself out of pain and grief. She was only 15 at the time. She wanted to kill herself to be in heaven with our loved ones. She did die at 15 and I know she is where she wanted to be. I miss her alot, but I know she's safeand sound with God.

    Feb 12
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  • michael60t

    I found your poem deeply moving, you have a great talent.

    Feb 12
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  • Sansiz

    beautiful poem... glorying suicide a bit though... i thnk we all want it to be all nice and dandy if we kill ourselves, but truth is we dont know what is on the other side... the man standing in white with outstretched arms may be a huge grizzly bearish thing ready to eaat us... or the Jehovah, God, Allah who calls it sinful to take your own life...

    Jan 29
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  • etchasketch22

    "Death" is the path to new Life... and within each seed of new Life is the seed of Death. Such is the cycle... Blessings...

    Jan 25
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  • sue1973

    well done this is absoultley well written keep up the good work brought tears to my eyes as i know what it feels like to be misunderstood.

    Jan 17
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  • indianloner

    i hear u.....

    Jan 16
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  • celestial47

    Crimson Snow you are a talent lost in this unforgiving world.If you had a million dollars you could make a play...it seems you may be able to write a play about your feelings and then one day she meets someone who understands and tells her it,s gonna be ok.That someone is out there. Keep hope.

    Jan 14
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  • wolfiedarkblood15

    Wow u made this up? not from a book i mean. cuz that is just amazing.... so sad then happy :'(

    Jan 14
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  • ShadoWolfx

    Wow...so beautiful Snow. :')

    Jan 14
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  • KaisonWolf

    O,_o this put a tear in my eye

    Jan 14
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  • modernethic308

    I feel like crying and I'm a dude lol. That was very comforting in a way for me. I'll never forget this poem

    Jan 13
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  • DarknessComing

    beautifully written

    Jan 12
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  • Anonymizz

    Jan 12
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  • celestegood2004

    Beautiful but so sad.

    Jan 11
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  • Blackthornedrose

    :O OMG ..... That's so sad!

    Jan 11
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  • lilmisty2

    Will the angels be with her when she dies, Oh yes, there will be angels. Angels who will cry and hold her close as the rattling breath stops.
    Angels who will assist her to the other side

    Good story, brought tears to my eyes, sorry about my reply but just had to say it, for no one goes alone, and all are met by someone

    Jan 11
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  • junetina

    So nice I like it..??

    Jan 11
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  • wolf911

    Nice poem. I can understand completely the imagery you used and other writing tools. Talented snow

    Jan 10
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  • LostLoveJ

    this is just beautiful, but so sad ):

    Jan 10
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  • jayleigh86

    Thank you so much for the beautiful words.

    Unfortunately, for me reading it was like looking at my own reflection. I have always been suicidal.

    Jan 10
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  • ForestofStars

    great words!

    Jan 10
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  • padmanabhan09

    amazed, but :(

    Jan 10
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  • MissShine

    Suicide? :'(

    Jan 9
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  • ExperienceProject

    beautiful work. Thank you for sharing.

    Jan 9
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  • Skittlesluvsrainbows

    That was amazing...truly amazing...

    Jan 9
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