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In Rhyme

By: grayday104
Written on January 15th, 2013
Age: 22-25 , Male
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51 responses
  • mysticblueishere

    This one is surely mesmerizing!! In contrast to the previous one which brought unsaid sadness.. and I smiled at "Her sweet smile my dumb lucked guile"

    And I can completely see "Writing" is your addiction.. :))

    May 13
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  • sprain

    have you tried putting your poems into songs? this would be a great one..

    May 5
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  • ShybutSweetGirl

    did you write that...? wow

    Apr 25
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    • grayday104

      Yep all here are by me : )

      Apr 25
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    • ShybutSweetGirl

      nice to find men who are old fashioned and actually write their feelings down...or in this case type them

      Apr 25
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  • 3rdfloorgirl

    That is very pretty. I enjoyed reading it. Good job Sir.

    Mar 30
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  • reachmygoalasap

    And she's not real? just a love you keep?

    Mar 25
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  • CarlaW

    You have a gift of Rhyme. Not much poetry is in Rhyme in todays standards. Most of all YOU have matched precisly what the 'falling in love' feels like. Stay with this and update us in your other works.
    I will look forward to reading more from you :)

    Feb 20
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  • Blondeangelmom

    This is beautiful :)

    Feb 9
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    • grayday104

      Thanks now if only she was real

      Feb 9
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    • Blondeangelmom

      Well, I hope you find her :) you are a very talented writer, maybe a book is in order ....

      Feb 9
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  • TheReikoku

    That's cute ^_^

    Feb 8
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    • grayday104

      yeah I get called sweet alot don't understand why?

      Feb 8
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  • SerendipitySmile

    This is awesome. Congratulations! Please continue with this gift.

    Feb 3
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    • grayday104

      Thanks and don't worry I'm not stopping any time soon

      Mar 19
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  • 2011A

    *applauds* Clearly the best young poet here! Does she know how you feel? No woman could resist this kind of love...I appreciate your beauty. kissesssssssssssss...xox

    Feb 3
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    • grayday104

      I just wish I knew who she is

      Mar 19
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  • wurzelnator

    Counting the seconds since we first met
    Please gift me a moment to love and to miss
    A name I love but can not claim
    The charm of her face my urge for a place
    My love to the smile I never see
    Pursue out your pleasure while bearing my strife(my favorite i really see what you say here)
    Without you I'll live but just can't see how
    Love is insane as I've showed here in line

    MAN ima end up spending all my tokens i keep reading your stuff i cant help but rate it up God bless i know you appreciate that gift God given you to write so from heart....its funny when you do it flows so easy and always sound the best yknow? God bless

    Jan 30
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    • wurzelnator

      AMEN yea man i look back on some of the stuff i wrote like....damn....really? And she wasnt the one which means i can only write things STRONGER and more POWERFUL its amazing yknow? I know that ladies out there and i cant wait to suprise and amuse her every moment i can with what she makes my heart sing and push into my hands and form words with. You should write something real nice anonmously to a lady you like stuff like this most ladies will love the mystery and it will compel them to pursue this man im sure they wont be let down when you finally reveal yourself.

      Jan 30
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    • grayday104

      yeah I would but I've never been good about hiding how I feel so do you have any of your stuff on here?

      Jan 30
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    • wurzelnator

      Very few i dont want people to get lost in all my stories cause i really like people readin my teen runaway story it reaches out to them and it shows people not to be afraid of anything and i dont want a bunch of stories cluttering them from seein it....i have posted 1 or 2 and then 2 more than dont rhyme but theyre definently from my heart....a part i havent seen before check em out whenever ya want!

      Jan 30
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    • grayday104

      Sure plan to within a few minutes

      Jan 30
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    • grayday104

      You haven't checked out any for awhile : (

      Mar 6
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    • wurzelnator

      Lol I hve just havent commented I been seeing em but past week havent been on much I admit

      Mar 6
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    • grayday104

      Sorry I have a poor memory But you'll forgive me right? Right?

      Mar 6
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    • wurzelnator

      Haha you didnt no wrong nothing to forgive homie

      Mar 6
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    • grayday104

      See! I knew you loved me!

      Mar 6
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  • thisaccountisgone

    This is epic

    Jan 23
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    • grayday104

      Thanks that's an epic compliment

      Mar 19
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  • thesphinxess

    Very nice!
    I hope for you, your wishes shall come true!

    Jan 22
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  • rainbowsilhouette

    i rated up by 5 :-)

    Jan 20
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  • lollysmiles30

    wow that's amazing

    Jan 18
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    • grayday104

      Thanks just glad people are enjoying please tell your friends

      Jan 18
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  • angelicsmiles

    Beautiful piece of writing.

    Jan 18
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    • grayday104

      thanks glad you like it

      Jan 18
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    • angelicsmiles

      You have a heart that feels love or pain which is still not cynical, and this is well expressed in this poem. Whats not to like. :)

      Jan 18
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  • Sungirl3

    Very nice. :)

    Jan 17
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    • grayday104

      Thanks this poem is actually hard for me to read hard to dream on what you don't have

      Jan 17
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  • jssp

    I like those lines, nicely put them together..

    Jan 16
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  • SilentBluemoon

    Lyrical and Devine.

    Jan 15
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    • grayday104

      Thanks there's many more to check out if you wish and be sure to tell your friends thanks

      Jan 15
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  • fractalpterodactyl

    Your such an amazing writer & I'm so lucky to having you in my life!! :') <3

    Jan 15
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    • grayday104

      You see! I keep telling you I'm awesome!

      Jan 15
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