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Blood Of Insanity

By: strivexwolf
Written on January 15th, 2013
Age: 18-21 , Male
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  • AmyLionheart

    great poem with emotion. emotion is the spice of life and if it's always focused on just happy or just love or just anger it kinda becomes over saturated and then numb. Poems are a great way to share the spectrem of emotions in a snapshop of one person in one time frame.



    In regards to the crude comments who the heck let the Trolls in? Trolls be Trollin' and only show how totally and completely lame and irrelevant they can really be.



    http://youtu.be/_QyYaPWasos (we didn't start the flame wars 16+ )

    Mar 5
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  • brianan

    Absolutely beautiful .... great emotion. Justin also likes it :)

    Jan 19
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  • anotherinnocent

    What leaves you feeling so tainted by this world?

    Jan 17
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    • strivexwolf

      it's complicated.

      Jan 18
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    • anotherinnocent

      This poem and your response leave me quite curious.

      Jan 18
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    • strivexwolf

      lets just say my past present and things of now are of the causes and such but it's not something the whole world needs to hear

      Jan 18
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    • anotherinnocent

      Understandable, however, did you not expect to be questioned in regards to what you have written?

      Jan 18
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    • strivexwolf

      no not really but if your seeking more answers you may want to look at my 2012 poetry collection it may be of some help and you could mail me about your thoughts after.. up to you though..

      Jan 18
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    • anotherinnocent

      I have and will continue to do so... I'll message you with my thoughts.

      Jan 18
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  • CanisLupusAlbus

    Very powerful and very true

    Jan 17
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  • CSWITZER12

    blah blah blah

    Jan 17
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    • strivexwolf

      whats that mean??

      Jan 17
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    • CSWITZER12

      I don't like depression hon. I'm sorry. That's how you feel I am truely and deeply sorry.

      Jan 23
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    • CSWITZER12

      Also, if you think about it, we all change for better when we receive the LORD God, we change who we are inside for the better but still we look the same on the outside. I guess what I am trying to say, is that what you wrote had a lot of meaning behind all those words speaking and what some people don't realize is the truth of it, just like some won't receive the love of God!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I believe that there is a lot of depression in you still, but remember Jesus loves you no matter what, and if you believe with all of your heart He will heal you.

      Jan 23
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    • brianan

      I don't believe this is depression. This poem is emotion and trying to find himself and where he comes from heritage wise. This is how I interpreted it. It is actually soul searching not pity. It is absolutely brilliant.

      Jan 23
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    • strivexwolf

      thanks n_n glad you understand.

      Jan 24
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  • mtiff

    Bad *** poem.

    Jan 16
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    • mtiff

      lol. I didn't realize it would bleep a.ss hehe

      Jan 16
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    • strivexwolf

      thanks. any thoughts you would like to say maybe your views??..

      Jan 16
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    • mtiff

      well, art to me, is not a competition and can't really be compared or measured. It is often what it is, and that's about it. I thought that the whole rhythm wasn't quite consistent the whole way through, but I loved what you did with your words!

      Jan 16
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    • mtiff

      will you read the one I just featured on my wall?

      Jan 16
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    • strivexwolf

      i'm sorry if its not too late i will i got busy and didnt relize ppl commented.. n_n'
      sorry..

      Jan 23
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    • mtiff

      That's ok! I will see ya around ep then! =)

      Jan 23
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    • strivexwolf

      will do! n_n

      Jan 23
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  • AdarSparty17

    Very nice, the word choice is what makes it excellent.

    Jan 16
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    • strivexwolf

      what do you mean sparty?? n_n"

      Jan 16
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  • mama12345678

    it is liked because it is organic. it comes from one person's human experience in the world and how this person sees the world. Blood is the richness of life, of human connection. It shows the contradiction of life. You did ask for comments, so I am going to be a little forward (and this is only for me, not for you or anyone else), I would change, "do not wish to change" to something like "be change". Because it shows that we all want to be who we are (i think that is agreed upon) but at the same time (in a contradictory way) we want to be change (in a good and positive way) to help ourselves and those we love and those we come into contact with. There is life's blood in change and there is life's blood in being who we are.. So anyway.... thanks for writing and sharing with us! It's great :)

    Jan 16
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  • sacraficeparadise

    thats amazing

    Jan 16
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    • strivexwolf

      how?? i would like to hear your thought. n_n'

      Jan 16
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  • beaniebabies

    Wow, awesome! :)

    Jan 16
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  • mama12345678

    great job!

    Jan 16
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  • shikharlogan

    i d't really know u but dude it touched

    Jan 16
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    • strivexwolf

      thanks. how did it touch you??.. is it okay to ask sorry n_n'

      Jan 16
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  • yawningfrog

    It's good. Striving for Ecstasy my mind uttered after reading this.

    Jan 15
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  • NoahBody123

    This is really good!

    Jan 15
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  • brianan

    Very good!!!

    Jan 15
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    • strivexwolf

      it is internal.
      wish i could get answers..
      would you happen to have any if so can you please message me i could use some..

      Jan 15
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  • thisaccountisgone

    ******* hell! This is deep, but so beautiful. This is your best piece yet!!

    Jan 15
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    • strivexwolf

      i told you i was making something unlike anything else ever made.
      it's my story.

      Jan 15
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    • thisaccountisgone

      I like it .... No I love it, write more like this

      Jan 15
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    • thisaccountisgone

      Oh btw am gonna send a poem am working on later I need your opinion

      Jan 15
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    • strivexwolf

      sadly this is me everyday... :(

      Jan 15
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    • thisaccountisgone

      Be strong

      Jan 15
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    • strivexwolf

      for how much longer. heh
      snow you do not realize this is very internal to me.

      Jan 15
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    • nightmarealavaster

      the poems words along with yours ring true.......it reminds me a lot of myself everyday......and also a quote i created that says "life is like a voodoo doll......you lose everything......you get nothing but pain and sorrow in return.....whether it be by your doing or someone elses......life will never stray from this gruesom fact......life will never stop its eternal torture........." so i have to agree with you.....i see no point in my disagreeing with you..........no point at all.......

      Jan 16
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    • strivexwolf

      you didn't quite make sense about your words could you clearify better i'm sorry n_n'

      Jan 16
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