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Thief Of Breath

By: GetBornAgain
Written on January 20th, 2013
Shadow walker, the nights own hands
come reaching out, with ice and cold
freeing spirits trapped inside -
The mortal coil that does unfold -
into several clouded realms.
king of kings and kings of things -
Halls of light and devil helms
darkness stretches, grasps and flings
each ethereal body. Now to Hells -
own paradise of blood and death
still inside the monstrous cells.
Here's to him! The thief of breath!
His cloak so dark and sword so fell.
By: GetBornAgain
Age: 18-21 , Male
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5 responses
  • SupermanDC
    SupermanDC

    Fantastic

    Jan 20
    1 like
  • highlander1999
    highlander1999

    not bad gut couple good rymes. but what the hell does it mean???

    Jan 20
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    • GetBornAgain
      GetBornAgain

      Well.. the thief of breath refers to an early death... the rest is slightly more complex. There are various references to Hell and heaven, good and evil and other such mystical ideas.

      Jan 20
      1 like
  • WindSylph
    WindSylph

    Dramatic... you stole my breath ;-)

    -Wind

    Jan 20
    2 likes
    • GetBornAgain
      GetBornAgain

      thank you =) it means a lot to get good feedback

      Jan 20
      1 like