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This Heart Of Mine.

By: Andyamir
Written on February 4th, 2013
How my heart is so kind... I even care for those who most hate me... how I want to have just some cruelty in me... but my heart is telling me otherwise... how even the highest mountain can not be compared to how big my heart is... how I wish I was not so kind... how I wish sometimes my heart was as black as the pitch black night... they take advantage and sometimes they use me... how cruel they can be... my heart and soul... so bright and not as dark as coal... just a bit more mean words can damage them and leave them crying in denial... just understand me please... I'm someone who can never hurt a single thing.
By: Andyamir
Age: 18-21
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4 responses
  • idontwannadream
    idontwannadream

    i know that sucks...we're such good people, too good...others see it and use it to their advantage...but still we can't be mean...its not you dude, don't wish to be like those who are cause then you'll end up being just like them...you're a good person...don't ever change that...like Lady Gaga says, You were born this way......

    Feb 4
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  • LifeisaGAMEbeAGAMER
    LifeisaGAMEbeAGAMER

    Amir you are making this challenge get harder and harder !!! This tells a lot that you have a big pure white heart !! You know it's just like your stealing my feeling and writing them down !!! When I get hurt I always wish I didn't have a heart or feelings or anything , just like them when they hurt me ,,,, but then I realize that the ONLY thing that makes me different from them is my white pure heart !!! And I'm sure you do the same !!

    Feb 4
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    • Andyamir
      Andyamir

      We're both feeling the same thing I've decided not to care anymore who ever wants to be my friend and not use me for their advantage then they are welcome to be my friend :)

      Feb 4
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    • LifeisaGAMEbeAGAMER
      LifeisaGAMEbeAGAMER

      No kidding !!!! Yeah that's true :)

      Feb 4
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