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Et Vera Incessu Patuit Dea

By: aFreshstart77
Written on February 5th, 2013

As I watched her approach she caught my eye. Each step a statement of her confidence. Yet as she passed her eyes revealed her inner child. As I turned to catch one last fleeting look, she stopped and returned my gaze. And before me she stood revealed, an undoubted goddess in her walk.


By: aFreshstart77
Age: 51-55 , Male
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  • aFreshstart77
    aFreshstart77

    people rarely turn out to be the person we imagine them to be littlecreekgirl. Sometimes they far exceed our expectations! :)

    Apr 24
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  • littlecreekgirl
    littlecreekgirl

    I spend so much time feeling invisable. Interesting to think about what I accidentally reveal without knowing. Did he see what he hoped for? Was it who she truly is? But the moment is gone before we know for sure...Great post

    Mar 22
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