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Pain In These Eyes

By: ADemonsFate
Written on February 10th, 2013
Age: 16-17 , Male
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10 responses
  • kidd4ever

    imy eye are darke then urs

    4 days ago
    1 like
  • squirelbud

    I am standing right beside you,,,,I see me in yor eyes,,,,I hold my hand of frendship,,,,I wish to stop yor cries....

    Mar 22
    1 like
  • Immortal36

    thats beautiful. you have a talent.

    Mar 5
    1 like
  • Younglover96

    No one is next to me, they either oppose me or they are shielded by me. Your story made me think, but not cry. I'm here as a shield.

    Feb 17
    1 like
  • tobcreal

    Thanks,wish i could make you smile,hope in you will make a change.

    Feb 11
    1 like
  • tansytopper

    i can see nd im seeing in your eyes.
    In your eyes Every thing looking clear nd bright
    I can feel how you spending your life
    Every thing looking clear nd bright.
    I can see a shine of hoppe in your eyes.
    Its mean you wana live
    Becouse i can see a big hoppe in your eyes
    Its enough for life.

    Feb 11
    2 likes
  • whatliesbeneath14

    This is a wonderful poem! i am sorry for your pain and as i recall about your bestfreind but keep your head up and keep writing!(:

    Feb 11
    2 likes
  • TimelessEyes

    Thanks for this inspired poem. Eye readers are becoming extremely rare in the world.

    Feb 11
    3 likes
  • thelonegraywolf

    Wonderful!

    Feb 10
    2 likes