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I Write Poetry

For You, Who Is Least Likely To Take The Time To Read It. :(

By: Whym
Written on February 20th, 2013
In the vastness of your mind
Brilliant patience, soul defied
Vapid thoughts spin vile tales
Softness blooms and doubt exhales

Shifting eyes to windowed walls
Cool predictions of End's call
Relieved of burden, demons rise
So clear the knowledge
Crystal eyes

Bound to fail and blind to fate
Our choice to love was made too late
And though the thoughts may cycle back
The heart recalls the cruel attack

Goodbye might be the only choice
Divorce the love and hush the voice
Learn to live a life anew
Learn to love life, without you.  

Copyright: Whym 2013 
By: Whym
Age: 36-40 , Female
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16 responses
  • Mileena28
    Mileena28

    Very beautiful and I can relate to the words.

    Mar 14
    2 likes
  • Tailendcharlie
    Tailendcharlie

    Brava !

    Mar 13
    2 likes
    • Whym
      Whym

      Thank you!

      Mar 13
      1 like
  • MrsHoover
    MrsHoover

    I can 'feel' your words Whym as they are heartfelt. Thanks for posting. MrsH xx

    Feb 21
    3 likes
    • Whym
      Whym

      Thank you friend. *Hugs*

      Feb 21
      1 like
  • emmaleela
    emmaleela

    "Softness blooms and doubt exhales", a totally beautiful line, thx for posting :)

    Feb 21
    3 likes
    • Whym
      Whym

      Thank you!

      Feb 21
      1 like
  • Jenni855
    Jenni855

    Wow. That was beautiful. I don't think I have ever read your poetry before and I am genuinely blown away by your talent. Your words are beautiful, sad and heartfelt.
    "Hugs" Can feel your pain in this and hate you are going through this.
    Well done on a beautiful piece of writing. xx

    Feb 21
    2 likes
    • Whym
      Whym

      Thank you Jenni <3 Last little bits that I need to let go of. (He's writing about me in places I keep bumping into...calling me a junkie and a ***** - just trying to settle my heart without too much anger)

      Feb 21
      1 like
    • Jenni855
      Jenni855

      I am so sorry, how cruel to treat you this way. You deserve so much more. Keep going, you write so beautifully.
      Thinking of you xx

      Feb 21
      1 like
  • DEGBEME
    DEGBEME

    So much said with so few words. Beautiful. :o) (((Whym)))

    Feb 21
    3 likes
    • Whym
      Whym

      Thanks friend. Just gotta get this all out of me so I can forget and move on. xo

      Feb 21
      1 like
    • DEGBEME
      DEGBEME

      This is one place to put your thoughts in print. I do think you should make a journal too. ;o)

      Feb 21
      1 like
  • SubtleTidings
    SubtleTidings

    This is very telling. I love this:

    "Bound to fail and blind to fate
    Our choice to love was made too late
    And though the thoughts may cycle back
    The heart recalls the cruel attack"

    it really moved me.

    Feb 20
    4 likes
    • Whym
      Whym

      Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

      Feb 21
      1 like
    • Jenni855
      Jenni855

      I particularly liked those lines as well. Very beautiful and emotive xx

      Feb 21
      1 like