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Our EP Gesture Dance

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Written on February 22nd, 2013
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Age: 26-30
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    Elandra77

    It is very pretty . And so well done. This was a good use of the gestures.

    I'm still waiting for the bear hug

    May 8
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      Elandra77

      So sweet of you!

      May 8
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    HardingP119

    "Today is the day I will drive with him"
    ....... remember it will have to be on the wrong side. :)
    Enjoyed reading it.

    May 8
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      HardingP119

      ..For you my dearest, It will not be just the pictures, The garden in itself will be sufficient for you. You are far more precious.... Hugs.

      May 8
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    Ktstime

    I missed this one. I am so glad I found it though. It's very sweet!

    Apr 28
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    tenderheartman

    Perfect! You've reflected so many things that I've thought in the past! Awesome! lol

    Apr 4
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    NoahBody123

    I'm glad, and relieved, that you have someone. (((hug)))

    Mar 24
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      NoahBody123

      LOL! Sorry... well at least you still have positive dreams. Mine were all burnt out many years ago. Now I just dream of when it will all stop at last.

      Mar 24
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    aod7909

    The heart wants, what the heart wants.

    Mar 21
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      aod7909

      Shout it from the rooftop!!

      Mar 21
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      aod7909

      Then keep your feet planted firmly on the ground and keep feeling good!

      Mar 21
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    slowride69

    Very nice

    Mar 21
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    BestForHerToBeDeleted

    Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!

    Mar 6
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    BlueTheWarrior

    It's so true!!!! :D since i joined EP 4 days ago, i can really relate to it.. :) You are great!

    Mar 6
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    justmeonline

    Mmm. Yes, those gestures can surely be loaded with emotion at times.

    Mar 6
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    Hope1001

    Oh WOW !!! This is AMAZING !!!
    I don't know what to say .. I Lost my words !!!!

    Feb 25
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      Hope1001

      Hahahaha !!! LOL Yes maybe !!!

      Feb 25
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    warmlight

    Hee hee I love this!! and it sounds like something I have experienced!! "Applauding" and "Beaming" at you my sweet friend!

    Feb 24
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    Freestanding

    Brilliant and well done. There is a bitter sweet sadness that weaves between the gestures and a languished loneliness that leaves the heart wanting more.

    Feb 24
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      Freestanding

      You are so welcome, dear. Lovely poem, my pleasure.

      Feb 24
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    jenga1

    Your word play was refreshing and fun to read. I also look forward to seeing the "fresh" entries in the gesture exchanges of our dearest EP soulmates and friends!

    Feb 24
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    lifesanadventure

    Loved your poem, it made me smile. :)

    Feb 24
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    Boshie

    I like the Anonimity of EP. I can find an intellectual person.
    The English is a little rusty, so to speak.
    This Brainiac really speaks, "Twi (Akan)" , and laughs at me - "HaHa", if I correct.
    Also reminds me , knows a little Russian.
    Oh oh ! Now I know I'm not a Brainiac, and never will be. "Ha Ha"

    Feb 23
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    sibyll

    wonderfull-looking forward to reading more.

    Feb 23
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    kelly1981

    Would you like a pillow fight, with this girl-friend :-) It's great fun lol.
    All sounds so familiar, great poem about EP my friend xxx

    Feb 23
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      kelly1981

      Aww so sweet! Would love to hang out with you too, my friend. In any case, it was a great day today, and will go out more often with friends, that's for sure! It was exactly what I needed. Love you too, Dreams!

      Feb 23
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      kelly1981

      Yes present time, still need it :-) Thanks for reminding me! Hugs xxx

      Feb 23
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    Neville76

    I like your poem and I find it playful in some parts and sad in others. I can relate to the first two stanza's as similar to my experience with anything online that is interactive.

    Feb 23
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    LadyBronte

    Loved it!

    Feb 22
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    sowmyabeautiful

    all thoughts clouded by lustful outings
    never lost till the time it may sound
    every moment affected by selfish interests
    gone dither when age withers

    Feb 22
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    HardingP119

    Pillow fights and wrestling it will be....love it.

    Feb 22
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    jenvice

    Very good post Beautiful I know many who have been there at one time or another.

    Feb 22
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    Tailendcharlie

    Superb !!

    Feb 22
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    1Booklover510

    I love it BD!!! very creative and what fun!

    Feb 22
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      1Booklover510

      you're welcome! It made me giggle and laugh.

      Feb 22
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    Babydoll42

    That's awesome....it should be the official EP theme song...*shouts* "Okay...who amongst us is a musician??? We need some sheet music written for these words!!"

    Bravo, BeautifulDreams42!!...(haha...I was going to shorten your name, but just noticed, your initials are the same as mine, BD42...haha...sorry...off topic)

    Wonderful writing!! ;)

    Feb 22
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    LittleMissGreenEyes

    this is really really good! I'm sure a lot of ppl can relate to you. and its genuine. its what makes it so good :)

    Feb 22
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    Deep4u

    :-)
    this'll become hit in ep

    Feb 22
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      skyfone464

      I agree.again one wonderfull create...
      she describe for many people here
      way of loving,living and what us ep give everdy
      many people do the same
      but only beatifulDreams can tel this on wright way...

      thank you the most,you are the best!

      Feb 22
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    SimonLaStrange

    gorgeous, simply enchanting! Brightening the days of even us old sour hearts who don't have these types of interactions on this dear site. I feel inspired by your true felt prose and wisdoms. I don't even know how to insert an emotion icon, but you make me want to learn.

    Feb 22
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    DreamingTaoTiger

    Oh yes the signs themselves on any site or method writing in ink pen or symbols flying over wires....they are all simply messengers of meaning we had since the first humans walked around. Gestures are such a lovely way of showing a new way of a conversation that carries meaning and thoughts from one person to the other....such a lovely way of communicating.....and so easy to interpret :)

    "adore"
    fits just right here :D
    I think I'll send it right now ^^

    Feb 22
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